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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
Any fear and uncertainty that Dana had disappeared with these words and
she pulled Alice to her, kissing her long and hard. Capturing her
tongue and sucking on it deliciously slow, tasting everything that she
could and wanting more, holding Alice tightly to her as she maneuvered
them up the stairs and towards her bedroom.
The large piece of her that hated how she looked couldn’t help but
wonder how she was doing this. How with only a few words Alice had
managed to make her feel so utterly confident and comfortable and how
all of her worries when it came to how she looked almost magically
washed away. Of course, they hadn’t. They were still there, lurking in
the shadows, in the dark and more dismal recesses of her mind where
Dana couldn’t help but dwell on the more grim what if’s that came with
having this disease. Though she wished she could be like Alice and be
the type of person who saw that infamous glass as half full she
couldn’t. Her parents were pragmatists and their influence had rubbed
off on her. After being closeted for so very long and having this
horrible hatred for herself and her sexuality, Dana couldn’t stop those
feelings. She couldn’t suddenly look at life and see everything good
and shiny and happy. That wasn’t who she was and part of her was
honestly perplexed that everyone other than Alice seemed to think she
was such a perpetually upbeat person.
Only Alice seemed to really know what was going on inside her and that
was why Dana had always loved her best and wanted Alice with her. She
saw past the thin surface self the athlete presented to the world and
to who she honestly was as a person and she loved her anyway. If she
was with anyone else Dana couldn’t see herself doing this. Letting them
kiss her deep and passionate, grinding into the impatient touch of
their hand as it slid down the front of her pants and underneath her
panties, arching up into their fingers as they teased at her pussy,
resting lightly outside only to trail up and apply tantalizing pressure
to her clit while she moaned into mouth busy devouring her own, sucking
on her tongue and holding her captive. Yes, there was no one else that
Dana could see herself doing this with. It was only Alice who could
make her feel safe enough, beautiful enough, and loved enough that she
would not only do this but want it. God, want it so fucking desperately
Dana could practically taste it like she could taste Alice’s chocolate
flavored lip gloss.
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(14 votes, average: 4.50 out of 5)
Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!