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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
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When skin met skin and Dana’s hurried and intent mission was at last
complete all cognitive thought left her mind and suddenly all she knew
was this touch, this feel, this sensation. Sliding herself up to ride
over the pale skin, her pussy wet as it pressed against Alice’s thigh
and looking down into brown eyes that squeezed involuntarily shut as
the writer moaned low in her throat when Dana moved over her. They
flickered open when she felt the whisper soft touch of fingertips
pushing the hair from her eyes and Alice smiled tremulously up at the
athlete and her eyes seemed to glow from deep within as she repeated
her earlier confession, her voice still thick with emotion and desire,
“I never stopped loving you, Dana.”
There was no response, at least not verbal, but Dana’s eyes flashed and
shone in such a way that there was no doubt in Alice’s mind what the
other woman was feeling. She could see it for herself at last. The love
and the devotion and the promise she had wanted for all of her life as
it was finally fulfilled. A promise of someone who would love her and
care for her until the end of their days. Who wouldn’t leave her and
dismiss her worries and insecurities and as she released gasping pants
that were sharp and hard when Dana’s fingers slid inside her pussy
Alice realized that this was worth it. That the way they parted had
been necessary because as much as she had loved Dana before she had
never been able to look into her eyes and know that the athlete
understood her and could really see all the fucking monsters she worked
so hard to hide. But now she did know and more than that she knew Dana
had seen them, all of them, and she had felt their wrath. And god, Dana
had seen the worst of her. The absolute worst and here she was anyway.
Loving her and wanting her and thrusting into her so sweet and deep and
touching her in ways that Alice had only dreamt of and never quite
believed actually existed. But they did and she knew that because of
Dana and bucking hard into the tennis player’s hand, her fingers
burying into brown locks as she met their lips in a feverish kiss, she
knew that this was the closest thing to perfection she would ever
experience.
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Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!