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All The White Horses: Part Two (2/5)
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“She’s not mad but she’s worried,” said Howie finally, looking over at
Alice who continued to stare at the turned off television and at her
own reflection. “And it’s totally our fault. Mom and Dad are going to
be so pissed at me for this.”
“If that’s the case then they’ll definitely want to string me up,” said
Alice wryly as she kept staring at her television reflection and
wondered how long her hair had that weird cowlick thing going on today.
She thought it sort of made her look like she had a stupid alien
antenna or something. “I’m not exactly their favorite person after what
happened in my break up with Dana and I’m sure this will not endear me
further.” Turning to Howie, she lifted an eyebrow as she drawled, “No
worries, kid. If they start reading you the riot act then just tell
them I corrupted you with my prescription drug addicted crazy ass ways.”
“As if,” Howie sniffed, giving Alice a look of complete disdain. He
waved his hand at her dismissively before checking on his nails to see
if he had gotten dirt under them from his encounter with the sleazy
reporter and remarked, “Don’t ask, don’t tell only applies if I’m in
the military and I don’t like their uniforms so there is little to no
chance of me letting you scapegoat yourself to my parents huge
Republican we hate scandal because it’s unseemly wrath. Besides,” he
drew the words out slowly as a wickedly knowing smile formed on his
features and he fixed a similar looking gaze on the blonde. “You did do
it all for the glory of love.”
Chuckling on recognizing the song lyrics, Alice bumped shoulders with
Howie and replied sardonically, “Are you saying that what I did with my
lipstick is like a knight in shining armor?”
“Well,” Howie clucked his tongue and studied the blonde thoughtfully,
reaching out to lightly touch the collar of her shirt. “That outfit is
from a fashion long time ago.”
Wearing an overly wounded expression, Alice laughed and gave Howie a
light whap to his stomach and the two rested against each other,
chuckling quietly and enjoying the temporary rest in worrying about
whether or not they had made life that much harder for Dana when she
already found herself in an incredibly difficult situation.
“I wish she could live forever,” said Alice in a distant murmur, her
eyes fixed on the door to Dana’s room and the look on her face giving
Howie the impression she didn’t even know she had just spoken her
thoughts aloud.
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OK – I just read the first chapter and this one – dreiser – awesome. truly. funny, sweet, sad, hopeful and bittersweet. I’d expect nothing less from you though. Very well done!
That was beautiful. Awesome writing as usual. Great way to end that chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Absolute perfection. I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again no doubt, but your writing is amazing. And I’m not just talking about the grammar, which is a big pet-peeve of mine, but I’m talking about the way you portray and characterize each character to form. You perfectly write and vocalize Alice and Dana (no doubt because of your love for the characters), but you also have a good sense for portraying all of the others. I know you love Helena, as do I, and I like how you are forming her as she’ll hopefully be portrayed in S3 (although I do like snarky Helena too!). I know where this story is heading, mainly from checking in at your journal for updates, and I’m still excited about it because of how it’s written. Anyway, long-winded I know, but I have to give accolades to your talent.
Awww i am soo inlove with this story! The way you write the characters is spot on! This chapter was just amazing! Please update soon
Thank you for this story. Yours are stories I can read over and over again and always love. Perfect.
Simply Awsome, I hope the actual season of Alice and Dana’s relationship is at least half as good as it is in your story, keep up the great work!!
That was great. Your writing is amazing. I love angst and there was enough to go around in this chapter. Their love confession was…beautiful. Great job.
I have read it more than one time and I found more and more things that I like in your story. I said before but danish has unbelieveble writers, thanks.
Hiya, I’m a silent lurker, BUT your stuff is great…the only other person here with as much talent to hold my attention is Ms.Layla_Gray, but you capture the couple like no one esle…keep it up and you have another fan here….Peace.
IC created the characters, but I am amazed by how well you “get” them. I’m sitting here at my desk feeling happy because Alice and Dana were able to admit their feelings for each other. At the same time there is a bittersweet feeling because there is a good chance that the overall ending of the story will not be happy. It’s sad that two people who were so well suited for each other and so in love had to waste so much time. But it makes for a great story for us. I will bide my time re-reading the first two parts until you post again. Thanks for another wonderful story.
I usually lurk, but I just had to comment. Beautiful. Your writing is simply beautiful. The character development, the story development, I feel more like a voyeur than a reader!! Thank you!
Amazing! I had butterflies in my stomach the entire time I read this story. You write Alice and Dana beautifully. I love Alice’s comments like, “you’re such a girl and yet so helpless about girly things” and Alice being so sweet with Dana while she was sick in the bathroom. Their thoughts and fears which you expressed, are things that Eileen and her writers failed to say in Season 2. I’ve always loved the playful and sarcastic aspect of their relationship- very well written. I can’t wait till your next update!
i had chills the entire time of reading this story. It was amazing the way you wrote about al and dane’s love and i so hope beyond hope that you write more. Please post soon
wow that was amazing! please post soon!
this is great I am just catching up so I hope that u have already post again