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All The White Horses: Part Two (2/5)
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“Hey,” murmured Howie and knocking his knee gently against Alice’s.
When the writer looked his way, he continued, “My big sis is so much
tougher than she looks. Once when we were kids we played this game of
street hockey and the kid from two houses down, Jimmy Masterson, who
had an impossibly large crush on Dane and therefore, I had an
impossibly large crush on him, hit her leg really hard but totally by
accident since he was practically in love with her when he was in the
middle of a slapshot.” Placing his hand over his heart that made him
look rather solemn despite the humorous look he had on his features,
Howie confessed, “I shrieked like the worst pansy girl but big sis kept
on playing through the rest of the game and scored three more points. I
think at that point poor Jimmy fell completely in love.”
“You shrieked?” asked Alice teasingly, lifting an eyebrow and returning
Howie’s knee knock from earlier. “Aren’t you big man on high school
campus captain of the soccer team? Dana told me last week you almost
tore some muscle in your knee because of an insanely dangerous play you
made to score a goal you didn’t even need to win the game.”
“It was against Daniel Murphy,” said Howie with a scowl and a peevish
expression on his features. “I hate that school. I know private schools
are supposed to be snotty but they’re just way too snotty for me. Plus
their uniforms are fucking ugly. And I’ll have you know that as a gay
man I find it highly disturbing to be involved in a sport like hockey
which involves men holding and whacking each other hard with their
sticks that’s entirely violent in nature.” Pausing to wear an over the
top look of wistfulness, Howie fake sighed and murmured, “Men whacking
each other hard with their sticks should never be done out of anger or
sport.”
After he said this, Howie turned to face Alice and they stared at one
another silently before simultaneously bursting into laughter and their
bodies tumbling against each other. Calming down in a few moments,
Alice released a shuddering breath and said, “You are hilarious and
fucking deliciously dirty, kid. Is that a side effect of Dane being so
adorably shy?”
“I dunno,” said Howie as he appeared to contemplate this. He tapped his
chin then looked at Alice with bright eyes and said, “I think it might
have something to do with the gay boy genes I luckily got versus the
gay girl genes poor sis was stuck with.” Alice grinned and elbowed him
in the side and Howie returned her grin then his face shifted into a
rather solemn look and he murmured, “Plus it probably has to do with
the fact that I was never really closeted like her. Big sis hated who
she was for such a long time that there’s no way she could joke about
it, you know? Because it wasn’t funny to her. It was just bad.”
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OK – I just read the first chapter and this one – dreiser – awesome. truly. funny, sweet, sad, hopeful and bittersweet. I’d expect nothing less from you though. Very well done!
That was beautiful. Awesome writing as usual. Great way to end that chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Absolute perfection. I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again no doubt, but your writing is amazing. And I’m not just talking about the grammar, which is a big pet-peeve of mine, but I’m talking about the way you portray and characterize each character to form. You perfectly write and vocalize Alice and Dana (no doubt because of your love for the characters), but you also have a good sense for portraying all of the others. I know you love Helena, as do I, and I like how you are forming her as she’ll hopefully be portrayed in S3 (although I do like snarky Helena too!). I know where this story is heading, mainly from checking in at your journal for updates, and I’m still excited about it because of how it’s written. Anyway, long-winded I know, but I have to give accolades to your talent.
Awww i am soo inlove with this story! The way you write the characters is spot on! This chapter was just amazing! Please update soon
Thank you for this story. Yours are stories I can read over and over again and always love. Perfect.
Simply Awsome, I hope the actual season of Alice and Dana’s relationship is at least half as good as it is in your story, keep up the great work!!
That was great. Your writing is amazing. I love angst and there was enough to go around in this chapter. Their love confession was…beautiful. Great job.
I have read it more than one time and I found more and more things that I like in your story. I said before but danish has unbelieveble writers, thanks.
Hiya, I’m a silent lurker, BUT your stuff is great…the only other person here with as much talent to hold my attention is Ms.Layla_Gray, but you capture the couple like no one esle…keep it up and you have another fan here….Peace.
IC created the characters, but I am amazed by how well you “get” them. I’m sitting here at my desk feeling happy because Alice and Dana were able to admit their feelings for each other. At the same time there is a bittersweet feeling because there is a good chance that the overall ending of the story will not be happy. It’s sad that two people who were so well suited for each other and so in love had to waste so much time. But it makes for a great story for us. I will bide my time re-reading the first two parts until you post again. Thanks for another wonderful story.
I usually lurk, but I just had to comment. Beautiful. Your writing is simply beautiful. The character development, the story development, I feel more like a voyeur than a reader!! Thank you!
Amazing! I had butterflies in my stomach the entire time I read this story. You write Alice and Dana beautifully. I love Alice’s comments like, “you’re such a girl and yet so helpless about girly things” and Alice being so sweet with Dana while she was sick in the bathroom. Their thoughts and fears which you expressed, are things that Eileen and her writers failed to say in Season 2. I’ve always loved the playful and sarcastic aspect of their relationship- very well written. I can’t wait till your next update!
i had chills the entire time of reading this story. It was amazing the way you wrote about al and dane’s love and i so hope beyond hope that you write more. Please post soon
wow that was amazing! please post soon!
this is great I am just catching up so I hope that u have already post again