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All The White Horses: Part Two (2/5)
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Each question received either no response from Dana who found herself
utterly frozen or a natural and confused one. After the seventh
question the man in the blue suit found himself nose to nose with Howie
who grabbed his tie and yanked him close. In the meantime, Alice
furiously fished through her purse to produce her newest lipstick
purchase from a shopping trip to Sephora with Helena, a shade that was
appropriately named Catfight, and proceeded to smear it over the camera
lens, completely blurring its view of Dana in a moment of artistic
inspired anger that Bette would have greatly appreciated.
Stunned by the ferocious although supremely humorous reactions from
both Alice and her brother, Dana found herself forcibly dragging them
away from the man in the blue suit and his camera man, trying her best
not to smile at the entirely gay boy threats Howie was extending as she
did. Who but her super protective and super fabulous younger sibling
would shake his fist at someone and declare that he hoped the dark and
ugly ass roots of their cheap and whorey hair coloring attempts would
always show? Alice accented Howie’s curse of dark roots that would
always show by hurling her now sadly worn down shade of Catfight
lipstick at the two men, managing to somehow achieve perfect aim
despite the virtual death grip Dana had on her arm, causing the
lipstick to make a loud enough plastic crunch noise upon impact with
the camera lens that Alice and Howie released triumphant whoops.
The drive to Dana’s condo had been filled with first laughter and loud
chastising and then grave silence as Alice and Howie grasped just how
their behavior was going to look when that footage saw the light of
day. And how it wasn’t going to reflect well on Dana at all. Their grim
expressions caused the tennis player to feel horribly guilty because
she honestly was so truly touched that they defended her that fiercely.
By the time they reached her condo Dana decided to call in the cavalry
so to speak and left Alice and Howie alone as she phoned first her
father and then the family lawyers to see if there was any way to stop
possible charges from being brought against them and for that footage
to be kept off the air.
Looking rather like a pair of oddly matching giraffes, Howie and Alice
craned both their heads and bodies to stare at the closing door to
Dana’s bedroom and vaguely listen to her as she began what would be a
long conversation with Irwin. Remaining in strange synchronization,
they released matching sighs and sank back onto the couch where they
stared at the television which remained off because it seemed like they
just didn’t deserve to have it on right now.
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OK – I just read the first chapter and this one – dreiser – awesome. truly. funny, sweet, sad, hopeful and bittersweet. I’d expect nothing less from you though. Very well done!
That was beautiful. Awesome writing as usual. Great way to end that chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Absolute perfection. I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again no doubt, but your writing is amazing. And I’m not just talking about the grammar, which is a big pet-peeve of mine, but I’m talking about the way you portray and characterize each character to form. You perfectly write and vocalize Alice and Dana (no doubt because of your love for the characters), but you also have a good sense for portraying all of the others. I know you love Helena, as do I, and I like how you are forming her as she’ll hopefully be portrayed in S3 (although I do like snarky Helena too!). I know where this story is heading, mainly from checking in at your journal for updates, and I’m still excited about it because of how it’s written. Anyway, long-winded I know, but I have to give accolades to your talent.
Awww i am soo inlove with this story! The way you write the characters is spot on! This chapter was just amazing! Please update soon
Thank you for this story. Yours are stories I can read over and over again and always love. Perfect.
Simply Awsome, I hope the actual season of Alice and Dana’s relationship is at least half as good as it is in your story, keep up the great work!!
That was great. Your writing is amazing. I love angst and there was enough to go around in this chapter. Their love confession was…beautiful. Great job.
I have read it more than one time and I found more and more things that I like in your story. I said before but danish has unbelieveble writers, thanks.
Hiya, I’m a silent lurker, BUT your stuff is great…the only other person here with as much talent to hold my attention is Ms.Layla_Gray, but you capture the couple like no one esle…keep it up and you have another fan here….Peace.
IC created the characters, but I am amazed by how well you “get” them. I’m sitting here at my desk feeling happy because Alice and Dana were able to admit their feelings for each other. At the same time there is a bittersweet feeling because there is a good chance that the overall ending of the story will not be happy. It’s sad that two people who were so well suited for each other and so in love had to waste so much time. But it makes for a great story for us. I will bide my time re-reading the first two parts until you post again. Thanks for another wonderful story.
I usually lurk, but I just had to comment. Beautiful. Your writing is simply beautiful. The character development, the story development, I feel more like a voyeur than a reader!! Thank you!
Amazing! I had butterflies in my stomach the entire time I read this story. You write Alice and Dana beautifully. I love Alice’s comments like, “you’re such a girl and yet so helpless about girly things” and Alice being so sweet with Dana while she was sick in the bathroom. Their thoughts and fears which you expressed, are things that Eileen and her writers failed to say in Season 2. I’ve always loved the playful and sarcastic aspect of their relationship- very well written. I can’t wait till your next update!
i had chills the entire time of reading this story. It was amazing the way you wrote about al and dane’s love and i so hope beyond hope that you write more. Please post soon
wow that was amazing! please post soon!
this is great I am just catching up so I hope that u have already post again