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All The White Horses: Part Two (2/5)
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Whether or not either of them would do anything about it was entirely in question.
There was nothing that Helena wanted more than for Alice to be happy,
truly and honestly happy because she had brought so much joy into the
British woman’s life despite the hurt and suffering she had been going
through at the time they became close. While she wanted desperately to
be the person to bring Alice that happiness she knew that couldn’t
happen. The blonde saw her as nothing more than a friend and her heart
belonged to the athlete. And she could see their friends and even
Dana’s younger brother pushing the women together and part of her
wanted them to succeed because she knew how happy Alice would be.
But at the same time, as Alice’s best friend, she couldn’t help but
resent them because she also knew that wasn’t what the writer wanted.
She remained so very scared of how she had behaved during her break up
with Dana that she no longer trusted herself near the other woman. The
athlete’s illness came into special consideration and Alice wouldn’t
allow even the thought of adding more stress into Dana’s life by
forcing her feelings of love and lust and longing onto her. Even if
those feelings were wholly returned.
Wanting to be with Dana in the only way that she felt she could, as a
loyal and faithful friend, Alice was spending all her free time with
the tennis player. And yes, again, Helena felt it was jealousy that
caused her to notice this. And maybe it was jealousy that was the cause
but that didn’t take away from the fact that it was true. Alice was
spending all of her free time with Dana and that was something that
called back to a time the blonde continued to feel so very guilty
about. When they broke up and she had been obsessed with the brunette
it seemed every waking moment of every day and even some of the
sleeping ones were devoted to Dana.
The last thing that Alice would want is to return to that time. Which
is why Helena arranged for them to have lunch and why she prepared this
speech in her head and why she felt strangely nervous as her best
friend approached with an easy smile on her face but that same sad look
that had remained in her brown eyes since she learned of Dana’s fight
with cancer.
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OK – I just read the first chapter and this one – dreiser – awesome. truly. funny, sweet, sad, hopeful and bittersweet. I’d expect nothing less from you though. Very well done!
That was beautiful. Awesome writing as usual. Great way to end that chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Absolute perfection. I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again no doubt, but your writing is amazing. And I’m not just talking about the grammar, which is a big pet-peeve of mine, but I’m talking about the way you portray and characterize each character to form. You perfectly write and vocalize Alice and Dana (no doubt because of your love for the characters), but you also have a good sense for portraying all of the others. I know you love Helena, as do I, and I like how you are forming her as she’ll hopefully be portrayed in S3 (although I do like snarky Helena too!). I know where this story is heading, mainly from checking in at your journal for updates, and I’m still excited about it because of how it’s written. Anyway, long-winded I know, but I have to give accolades to your talent.
Awww i am soo inlove with this story! The way you write the characters is spot on! This chapter was just amazing! Please update soon
Thank you for this story. Yours are stories I can read over and over again and always love. Perfect.
Simply Awsome, I hope the actual season of Alice and Dana’s relationship is at least half as good as it is in your story, keep up the great work!!
That was great. Your writing is amazing. I love angst and there was enough to go around in this chapter. Their love confession was…beautiful. Great job.
I have read it more than one time and I found more and more things that I like in your story. I said before but danish has unbelieveble writers, thanks.
Hiya, I’m a silent lurker, BUT your stuff is great…the only other person here with as much talent to hold my attention is Ms.Layla_Gray, but you capture the couple like no one esle…keep it up and you have another fan here….Peace.
IC created the characters, but I am amazed by how well you “get” them. I’m sitting here at my desk feeling happy because Alice and Dana were able to admit their feelings for each other. At the same time there is a bittersweet feeling because there is a good chance that the overall ending of the story will not be happy. It’s sad that two people who were so well suited for each other and so in love had to waste so much time. But it makes for a great story for us. I will bide my time re-reading the first two parts until you post again. Thanks for another wonderful story.
I usually lurk, but I just had to comment. Beautiful. Your writing is simply beautiful. The character development, the story development, I feel more like a voyeur than a reader!! Thank you!
Amazing! I had butterflies in my stomach the entire time I read this story. You write Alice and Dana beautifully. I love Alice’s comments like, “you’re such a girl and yet so helpless about girly things” and Alice being so sweet with Dana while she was sick in the bathroom. Their thoughts and fears which you expressed, are things that Eileen and her writers failed to say in Season 2. I’ve always loved the playful and sarcastic aspect of their relationship- very well written. I can’t wait till your next update!
i had chills the entire time of reading this story. It was amazing the way you wrote about al and dane’s love and i so hope beyond hope that you write more. Please post soon
wow that was amazing! please post soon!
this is great I am just catching up so I hope that u have already post again