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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 4
Story written on June 7, 2012 by Liah x Doll.
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Bette took a deep breath to try and soothe the pang in her chest when she thought of the blonde, Where are you, Tina?
She looked around the gallery that had begun to thin out in certain areas due to people moving to the backroom to dance. The people that were left, spoke about the pieces of art hanging on the walls while some made small talk about upcoming shows. Several people passed back and forth in front of the view to the entrance as Bette saw a glimpse of blonde that nearly made her heart stop. She inwardly screamed for the people to move out of the way, only catching glimpses of that sun kissed blonde and the slightest hint of those pink lips. Before her frustrations could take over, her silent prayer was answered a second later.
Like a curtain, the people moved out of the way and rewarded Bette with the most heavenly sight. Her breath caught in her throat as she took in every inch of the beautiful woman who had just entered the gallery. Her mid-length hair was in bouncy curls that framed her face and fell gracefully onto her shoulders and back. Her black one-shoulder dress hugged every curve on her body, curves that were even sexier than any fantasy Bette could ever hope to have. Her cherry red pumps showed off her very toned, very long legs. Bette nearly drooled at the sight, she was in complete awe.
Tina was oblivious to Bette’s stare since Helena was busy introducing her to Jodi and a few other acquaintances but a few seconds later, Tina’s eyes began to roam the gallery and stopped when they landed on Bette. She wasn’t searching for anything in particular, at least that’s what Tina told herself but somehow her gaze traveled to the exact spot that made her weak at the knees. Bette was absolutely beautiful.
Her wild curls were just as sexy as ever, she wore a charcoal grey pencil skirt that perfectly outlined the curves that Tina spent all of last night thinking about. Bette’s burgundy button up was short sleeved and slightly ruffled along the buttons, the first few were left undone and gave Tina the perfect peak of her mocha cleavage. Her gaze lingered on the teasing view at the laced edgings of her bra, Tina had to swallow hard and compose herself before walking over.
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Neither one is married to their GFs so break it off as gently as possible and then see where their relationship can go. It may burn fast and furious and then flame out or it might be the “Eternal Flame”.
wowowow soo romantic and beautiful story like this i love it thank you!!!
Thanks for the posting… Wow! I wish that relationships didn’t get into the desperation phase when their time of completion was over.I know that letting go is hard but when the relationship has come to its end being miserable is truly not the way to go. Holding on to something that isn’t there is a cruel thing to do to yourself. Life is too short to be so miserable. Let go to Sam, Tina! Let go of Ava, Bette. Its okay to do that as being miserable is not evolving. guess maybe its a fear that everyone will look at us as being failures in a relationship, but honestly that isn’t what the truth of it is. Others come into our lives for a reason, a season or a lifetime… to reflect back to us parts of ourselves… our past, our present or a possible future.
Oh, WOW!!! This will be the forever kind of love with these two when they finally get together. Please let them both know somehow that their girlfriends are having affairs and they don’t have to be feeling guilty to break off their respective relationships. They are so right for each other. Awesome chapter. Thanks.
Hey now! My lips are tingling and I wasn’t the one being kissed. Nice update. Can’t wait for more.
That was awesome and can’t wait to see Bette dump Ava and Tina dump Sam. Please post more, thanks!
loving it! I just think if Tina is so eager to get Bette to realize that Tina’s is better for her than Ava then Tina should not seem guilty about Sam, I mean she shouldn’t seem unsure herself. Hope to read more soon Liah! Thanks :D
I hope Bette has now gotten all the encouragement she needs to do the right thing and end it with Ava. Tina has some thinking of her own to do. In the mean time, Helena needs to give up with the pursuit of Tina already. But… if she waits around long enough, she can be there to “console” Ava. They would likely be a perfect match. ;) Thanks for the post, Liah! :)
still with your big smile, just like us when we see each new chapter, your story is amazing and well written. wait to read more, please still post often! :*
Amazing update love your story.Right direction.PPS
There is an analogy that I have in mind for Bette and Tina’s situation but words fail me right now. I love where you have taken this story, I feel like you’re trying on something new. You’re doing a great job conveying Bette’s turmoil, and I love that you made Tina intuitive enough to pick up on it. The fact that she had the audacity to bring it up shows immense courage. I’m glad that they’re taking time apart to evaluate their own relationships. Doing the right thing in other words. I have a question for you, do you feel that a story is easier to write if sides are black and white and Bette and Tina’s? They’re both unhappy in their current relationships and should be with each other. Would they have felt the same way about each other if they were happy with their girlfriends? Ok that’s 2 questions but I just love how you weave your stories. You really do love us. Thank you for the awesome post Miss Liah. I hope I don’t offend you with my questions.
I just read all 4 updates on your new story. I LOVE IT! I can’t wait to read more. Thank you for this excellent story.
ava – is she like 15?? totally immature.
Oh this just getting more, and more interesting . I can’t wait to see how each will handle this situation. And how they deal with they feel about each other. What will each decide and will they end up together . Can’t wait post soon
I’m happy cuz It’s a long post… But I wanna cry!….Dammit!..Lets just kick Ava out A.S.A.P.! And bring Sam with her…Please..??
Really enjoyed it
I really really love this story! You have an awesome way of building this up!! Can’t wait to see what happens next!
What a beautiful chapter! Loving it Liah!
WOOOOOW. That kiss was better than anything I could have expected! I love this story, so full of emotion I can feel it all over my own being. Amazing writing :)