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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 4
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Tina excused herself from Helena and with as much grace as she could manage, she made her way over to Bette. Her heart was pounding so hard against her chest that Tina thought she was going to fall over, her knees were trembling along with the rest of her body. She was able to keep herself upright but she still prayed that she didn’t trip or do something to make herself look stupid. The closer she got, the wider Bette’s smile became. It made her even more nervous, butterflies were flying frantically around her stomach.
After what seemed like a lifetime, she finally made it to Bette and if it was even possible, her heart began to pound even harder than before.
"Hi" Tina said with a wide smile, her tone shy.
Bette could only smile for the first several seconds, she was completely overwhelmed with the happiness at seeing Tina not to mention how stunning she looked.
"You look beautiful" Was all she was able to say but it was the honest truth.
"So do you" Tina said with a smile of her own, never breaking eye contact with the gorgeous brunette in front of her.
"I’m glad you came, Tina . . really glad. You have no idea" Bette said softly but her smile never left her, she could feel the aches in her cheekbones but it was easily ignored.
"I’m glad too. Sorry we took so long, there was an accident on the freeway so Helena’s driver had to take a detour" Tina noticed the initial relief in Bette’s eyes and wanted to clarify her tardiness. The last thing she wanted was for Bette to think she and Helena had done something in secret.
"Its fine, I’m just glad you’re here"
"Hello, Bette"
Bette tore her eyes away from Tina to look at Helena who had just walked up to them. Bette’s eyes quickly glanced at the closeness between Helena and Tina as she forced herself to make a mental note about how she and Helena were friends. She could be jealous yes but she shouldn’t have the desire to punch Helena in the face the way she so obviously did. She felt guilty for having such a negative thought, only a little though.
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Neither one is married to their GFs so break it off as gently as possible and then see where their relationship can go. It may burn fast and furious and then flame out or it might be the “Eternal Flame”.
wowowow soo romantic and beautiful story like this i love it thank you!!!
Thanks for the posting… Wow! I wish that relationships didn’t get into the desperation phase when their time of completion was over.I know that letting go is hard but when the relationship has come to its end being miserable is truly not the way to go. Holding on to something that isn’t there is a cruel thing to do to yourself. Life is too short to be so miserable. Let go to Sam, Tina! Let go of Ava, Bette. Its okay to do that as being miserable is not evolving. guess maybe its a fear that everyone will look at us as being failures in a relationship, but honestly that isn’t what the truth of it is. Others come into our lives for a reason, a season or a lifetime… to reflect back to us parts of ourselves… our past, our present or a possible future.
Oh, WOW!!! This will be the forever kind of love with these two when they finally get together. Please let them both know somehow that their girlfriends are having affairs and they don’t have to be feeling guilty to break off their respective relationships. They are so right for each other. Awesome chapter. Thanks.
Hey now! My lips are tingling and I wasn’t the one being kissed. Nice update. Can’t wait for more.
That was awesome and can’t wait to see Bette dump Ava and Tina dump Sam. Please post more, thanks!
loving it! I just think if Tina is so eager to get Bette to realize that Tina’s is better for her than Ava then Tina should not seem guilty about Sam, I mean she shouldn’t seem unsure herself. Hope to read more soon Liah! Thanks :D
I hope Bette has now gotten all the encouragement she needs to do the right thing and end it with Ava. Tina has some thinking of her own to do. In the mean time, Helena needs to give up with the pursuit of Tina already. But… if she waits around long enough, she can be there to “console” Ava. They would likely be a perfect match. ;) Thanks for the post, Liah! :)
still with your big smile, just like us when we see each new chapter, your story is amazing and well written. wait to read more, please still post often! :*
Amazing update love your story.Right direction.PPS
There is an analogy that I have in mind for Bette and Tina’s situation but words fail me right now. I love where you have taken this story, I feel like you’re trying on something new. You’re doing a great job conveying Bette’s turmoil, and I love that you made Tina intuitive enough to pick up on it. The fact that she had the audacity to bring it up shows immense courage. I’m glad that they’re taking time apart to evaluate their own relationships. Doing the right thing in other words. I have a question for you, do you feel that a story is easier to write if sides are black and white and Bette and Tina’s? They’re both unhappy in their current relationships and should be with each other. Would they have felt the same way about each other if they were happy with their girlfriends? Ok that’s 2 questions but I just love how you weave your stories. You really do love us. Thank you for the awesome post Miss Liah. I hope I don’t offend you with my questions.
I just read all 4 updates on your new story. I LOVE IT! I can’t wait to read more. Thank you for this excellent story.
ava – is she like 15?? totally immature.
Oh this just getting more, and more interesting . I can’t wait to see how each will handle this situation. And how they deal with they feel about each other. What will each decide and will they end up together . Can’t wait post soon
I’m happy cuz It’s a long post… But I wanna cry!….Dammit!..Lets just kick Ava out A.S.A.P.! And bring Sam with her…Please..??
Really enjoyed it
I really really love this story! You have an awesome way of building this up!! Can’t wait to see what happens next!
What a beautiful chapter! Loving it Liah!
WOOOOOW. That kiss was better than anything I could have expected! I love this story, so full of emotion I can feel it all over my own being. Amazing writing :)