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    B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 18: THE VAULT

    Story written on June 10, 2020 by proteonomics.
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    Kit: “what?” Bette: “didn’t Peggy tell you that Melvin came to my office threatening me?” Kit: “she said he visited you, to talk about Nadia” Bette: “he said that someone, I believe one of his pals, wanted to hurt me” Kit: “damn, those sons of a bitch” Bette: “we’ll find out” Kit: “where is your

    Kit: “what?”

    Bette: “didn’t Peggy tell you that Melvin came to my office threatening me?”

    Kit: “she said he visited you, to talk about Nadia”

    Bette: “he said that someone, I believe one of his pals, wanted to hurt me”

    Kit: “damn, those sons of a bitch”

    Bette: “we’ll find out”

    Kit: “where is your car?”

    Bette: “here in Tina’s”

    Kit: “where is Tina’s house?”

    Bette: “we can talk later about that, now I have to get dressed and go there”

    Kit: “Bette, I’m worried for you”

    Bette: “I know, me too…, I was lucky I wasn’t there”

    Kit: “Peggy and the others are here”

    Bette: “hmm, I guess everybody knows what has happened, I’ll have to check on my apartment and talk to the insurant company, they would like to have the police report”

    Kit: “that’s not the point, the problem is that someone, maybe more than one, wants to kill you, we need a lawyer, Peggy called Joyce, she’s in her way, please come as soon as possible”

    Bette: “I’ll be there soon, bye”

    Tina had heard the whole conversation.

    Tina: “I’ll go with you”

    Bette: “no, they will ask where I was, and we can’t tell them that we were here”

    Tina thought… yes…, there is an alternative; she has the keys of that hotel room she has reserved for her godmother for a long time just in case, she may need to come and hide.

    Tina: “Bette, you already told Kit…, look, I have an idea, the building next to this is also under my representation and it’s a hotel, I reserved a room there for your mom, in case Maxine comes and needs to hide”

    Bette: “I see, we can tell them that we came to the hotel… hmm, to do what?

    Tina: “I know what you mean, but nobody else must know about the sanctuary and if they come, the police could search inside”

    Bette: “yes, you’re right… (smiling ironically) we could say that we came to this hotel to make love…”

    Tina: (sighing) “no very good for my reputation… but there’s no choice”

    Bette: “they will ask why here and not in my place”

    Tina: “we can say that I live in the hotel, I have few things there, we can go there and leave more things and make some disorder…, you know, like if you and me…”

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    1. Sounds like there’s going to be an unscheduled meeting at the bank between Melvin and his crew and Bette and her crew. Except Bette will have prior warning from Helena….. Now the plot thickens! They need to get their business done and get out of there before the bad guys arrive. But how long can it take to get access to the safe deposit boxes and get one opened and leave the bank? The group is already about to enter the vault, so ten minutes at the most? Surely Aaron cannot get across town that quickly. And they have been very careful that Melvin never see Tina throughout the story. Will he see her for the first time? Bette and Tina need to be gone quickly as well.

      Good chapter – things are moving along in the mystery and the romance between Bette and Tina. Now to resolved all this intrigue over the company….

      Thanks for the chapter… please give us more when you can. Thank you for this update….can’t wait to see what happens next.

      • Hi Martha:

        Thanks, you always write valuable and interesting comments.

        Yes, the plot s getting interesting, I don’t know how long it will take to leave the bank for Bette’s team, but for sure there will be some hubbub there.

        The question is why the elders don’t want Melvin to see Tina… Why?

        I am very sorry I couldn’t update every week as I was thinking, but when chapters are short it is easier when they are long it takes a little more time, but I’ll do what I can to post more frequently.

        Thanks for your comment and for following the story.

        P

    2. Great chapter proteonomics!

      Oh oh, you leave us again with a cliffy!

      Will it come to a confrontation between the two groups or will Bette have the luck and time to get the papers and be gone before Melvin and his group arrive at the bank? One thing about Melvin, he seems honestly to care that somebody tried to harm Bette and take action to punish the bastards who did try to hurt her.

      Is Tasha going to do anything about the fact she knew Melvin lied and denied to recognize some of the men in the pictures? Did she order to follow Melvin?

      The plot thickens and it seems there will be a confrontation! Make sure nothing bad happens to all the girls!

      The relationship between Bette and Tina is growing, lot of love and trust, Bette still is insecure about some things, but yes they are trusting each other and will be there for each other.

      Great chapter my friend!

      Take care of yourself and stay save and healthy ????

      • Hi Bibi:

        Sorry for the cliffy, but I can’t continue because the rest is a lot.

        That is a good question will both teams meet at the bank?

        Melvin is Bette’s father, and perhaps Bette is the only person in the world that Melvin still has some good feeling, you know, even the worse persons need to love someone, perhaps it is the case of Melvin.

        Tasha has her own game here and maybe she is up to something.

        I will always try to protect TIBETTE, but certain things may happen, hope they act smart enough.

        The love and trust between Bette and Tina is growing, but there is a difference,
        while Tina thought Bette was dead, and find her again was a blessing, Bette thought Tina betrayed her and she is still insecure of herself more than of Tina.

        Thank you very much, my friend, for your comment and your support.

        P

      • Hey Escorpion:

        Que bien que te gusto el capitulo, yo estaba un poco en duda si les gustaria o no, yo se que te he dejado intrigada, pero tratare de subir el otro pronto.

        Gracias por seguir la historia y por tu comentario.

        P

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