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    B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 18: THE VAULT

    Bette: “I have the picture…, you mean, like this bed?”

    Tina: “yeah, we have to do that before we go to the police”

    Bette: (almost laughing) “hmm, yeah, why not…, you’re a real piece of art, so many talents”

    Tina: (slapping Bette’s leg) “stop talking in that way about me; we have to take a shower”

    Bette: “come on I’m just kidding, I love you baby…, are you suggesting we shower together?”

    Tina: “yup, there is no time”

    Bette: (laughing) “I knew you wanna touch me”

    Tina: “hey…”

     

    Midtown police station

     

    When Bette and Tina arrived at the police station it was around 4 am, they found everybody there, besides Kit and Peggy, Helena, Louise, Alice, Joyce, and Sharon were there. Seeing Bette and Tina together, all of them could figure out how Bette spent the night.

    Kit: “nice to see you, Tina, I was hoping it was you who saved my sister from dead”

    Tina: “hi, Kit”

    Bette: “good morning sister, I’m here too”

    Kit: “hi, Bette, go and talk to Joyce, she’s with Peggy, Tina, baby girl, have you ate something already?”

    Tina: “no…, neither Bette”

    Kit: “okay, we’ll wait for her, but we have a good coffee over here, what about a cup?”

    Tina: “oh, that will be very good, I’m sleepy”

    On the other side of the waiting hall Peggy, Joyce, and Bette were talking.

    Peggy: “where did you spend the night?”

    Bette: “I was… with Tina, she’s my girlfriend”

    Joyce: “fortunately, Tasha is a friend; I think we can ask for confidentiality in that respect…”

    As they were talking a tall African American man entered the station, it was Melvin Porter. The man went directly to Bette.

    Melvin: “are you okay, Bette?”

    Bette: “are you disappointed that I didn’t die?”

    Melvin: “don’t say that, you’re my daughter, and you know, it wasn’t me who did this, I told you, I don’t want you dead, but I’m going to find out who did this”

    Peggy: “well, one of your associates wants your daughter dead”

    Melvin: “you don’t know, and I doubt that someone from my side would do that”

    Bette: “then, who?”

    Melvin didn’t answer.

    Peggy: “hmm, it looks like you’re losing your touch and command…, are you getting old?”

    Comments

    1. Sounds like there’s going to be an unscheduled meeting at the bank between Melvin and his crew and Bette and her crew. Except Bette will have prior warning from Helena….. Now the plot thickens! They need to get their business done and get out of there before the bad guys arrive. But how long can it take to get access to the safe deposit boxes and get one opened and leave the bank? The group is already about to enter the vault, so ten minutes at the most? Surely Aaron cannot get across town that quickly. And they have been very careful that Melvin never see Tina throughout the story. Will he see her for the first time? Bette and Tina need to be gone quickly as well.

      Good chapter – things are moving along in the mystery and the romance between Bette and Tina. Now to resolved all this intrigue over the company….

      Thanks for the chapter… please give us more when you can. Thank you for this update….can’t wait to see what happens next.

      • Hi Martha:

        Thanks, you always write valuable and interesting comments.

        Yes, the plot s getting interesting, I don’t know how long it will take to leave the bank for Bette’s team, but for sure there will be some hubbub there.

        The question is why the elders don’t want Melvin to see Tina… Why?

        I am very sorry I couldn’t update every week as I was thinking, but when chapters are short it is easier when they are long it takes a little more time, but I’ll do what I can to post more frequently.

        Thanks for your comment and for following the story.

        P

    2. Great chapter proteonomics!

      Oh oh, you leave us again with a cliffy!

      Will it come to a confrontation between the two groups or will Bette have the luck and time to get the papers and be gone before Melvin and his group arrive at the bank? One thing about Melvin, he seems honestly to care that somebody tried to harm Bette and take action to punish the bastards who did try to hurt her.

      Is Tasha going to do anything about the fact she knew Melvin lied and denied to recognize some of the men in the pictures? Did she order to follow Melvin?

      The plot thickens and it seems there will be a confrontation! Make sure nothing bad happens to all the girls!

      The relationship between Bette and Tina is growing, lot of love and trust, Bette still is insecure about some things, but yes they are trusting each other and will be there for each other.

      Great chapter my friend!

      Take care of yourself and stay save and healthy ????

      • Hi Bibi:

        Sorry for the cliffy, but I can’t continue because the rest is a lot.

        That is a good question will both teams meet at the bank?

        Melvin is Bette’s father, and perhaps Bette is the only person in the world that Melvin still has some good feeling, you know, even the worse persons need to love someone, perhaps it is the case of Melvin.

        Tasha has her own game here and maybe she is up to something.

        I will always try to protect TIBETTE, but certain things may happen, hope they act smart enough.

        The love and trust between Bette and Tina is growing, but there is a difference,
        while Tina thought Bette was dead, and find her again was a blessing, Bette thought Tina betrayed her and she is still insecure of herself more than of Tina.

        Thank you very much, my friend, for your comment and your support.

        P

      • Hey Escorpion:

        Que bien que te gusto el capitulo, yo estaba un poco en duda si les gustaria o no, yo se que te he dejado intrigada, pero tratare de subir el otro pronto.

        Gracias por seguir la historia y por tu comentario.

        P

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