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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 18: THE VAULT
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Melvin didn’t answer; he turned around and left the building visibly angry.
Even though the lights outside the station were dim, the week beam of sunlight allowed Alice to see something through the window, she called Helena and both, sneaking up, left the building.
A few minutes later, the police officer called Bette to a room for interrogation.
Officer: “Captain Williams is waiting for you to ask you some questions about last night case, she said you can bring your lawyer”
In the interrogation room only Tasha, Joyce, and Bette meet to talk about the explosion.
Tasha: “is this event related to that man from Lower Manhattan that I arrested a few months ago if I not mistaking it was in February?”
Bette: “you mean Aaron Kornbluth?
Tasha: “the same one”
Bette: “it may have, but I haven’t talked to him in several weeks”
Tasha: “hmm, do you have any clue, who else could be?”
Bette: “I’m not sure, but I know who knows something about this attack”
Tasha: (grabbing a pad and a pen) “do you have a name and address”
Bette: “yes”
Tasha: “excellent, tell me”
Bette: “it’s my father, Melvin Porter”
Bette’s answer left Tasha and Joyce dumbfounded
Tasha: “can you explain”
Bette told Tasha what happened on Monday morning in her office when Melvin visited her.
Bette: “what concerns me is that he came here to the police station a few minutes ago, to ask me if I was fine”
Tasha: “really…? How did he know?”
Bette: “that’s a very good question and my main concern”
Tasha: “hmm, we’ll find out, but this is a good point to start”
Bette: “tell me, Tasha, have your police officers already checked the video cameras in the parking garage?”
Tasha: “there was an interference in the video recording of around 2 minutes at 9:10 pm. before the explosion, apparently that was the time when the criminals set the bomb, we believe that interference was done on purpose”
Bette: “oh, you’re right, you don’t have access…, I was talking about the other cameras”
Tasha: “which other cameras?”
Bette: “my cameras, I set two cameras in the top of my parking spot; it was an experiment, just to see how long they last, they are solar cameras”
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Sounds like there’s going to be an unscheduled meeting at the bank between Melvin and his crew and Bette and her crew. Except Bette will have prior warning from Helena….. Now the plot thickens! They need to get their business done and get out of there before the bad guys arrive. But how long can it take to get access to the safe deposit boxes and get one opened and leave the bank? The group is already about to enter the vault, so ten minutes at the most? Surely Aaron cannot get across town that quickly. And they have been very careful that Melvin never see Tina throughout the story. Will he see her for the first time? Bette and Tina need to be gone quickly as well.
Good chapter – things are moving along in the mystery and the romance between Bette and Tina. Now to resolved all this intrigue over the company….
Thanks for the chapter… please give us more when you can. Thank you for this update….can’t wait to see what happens next.
Hi Martha:
Thanks, you always write valuable and interesting comments.
Yes, the plot s getting interesting, I don’t know how long it will take to leave the bank for Bette’s team, but for sure there will be some hubbub there.
The question is why the elders don’t want Melvin to see Tina… Why?
I am very sorry I couldn’t update every week as I was thinking, but when chapters are short it is easier when they are long it takes a little more time, but I’ll do what I can to post more frequently.
Thanks for your comment and for following the story.
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Great chapter proteonomics!
Oh oh, you leave us again with a cliffy!
Will it come to a confrontation between the two groups or will Bette have the luck and time to get the papers and be gone before Melvin and his group arrive at the bank? One thing about Melvin, he seems honestly to care that somebody tried to harm Bette and take action to punish the bastards who did try to hurt her.
Is Tasha going to do anything about the fact she knew Melvin lied and denied to recognize some of the men in the pictures? Did she order to follow Melvin?
The plot thickens and it seems there will be a confrontation! Make sure nothing bad happens to all the girls!
The relationship between Bette and Tina is growing, lot of love and trust, Bette still is insecure about some things, but yes they are trusting each other and will be there for each other.
Great chapter my friend!
Take care of yourself and stay save and healthy ????
Hi Bibi:
Sorry for the cliffy, but I can’t continue because the rest is a lot.
That is a good question will both teams meet at the bank?
Melvin is Bette’s father, and perhaps Bette is the only person in the world that Melvin still has some good feeling, you know, even the worse persons need to love someone, perhaps it is the case of Melvin.
Tasha has her own game here and maybe she is up to something.
I will always try to protect TIBETTE, but certain things may happen, hope they act smart enough.
The love and trust between Bette and Tina is growing, but there is a difference,
while Tina thought Bette was dead, and find her again was a blessing, Bette thought Tina betrayed her and she is still insecure of herself more than of Tina.
Thank you very much, my friend, for your comment and your support.
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Hola proteonomics que sorpresa cuando ví el capítulo tú sabes que está historia me encanta y el capítulo me gustó y me dejaste intrigada con el final porque no sabemos que va a pasar gracias
Hey Escorpion:
Que bien que te gusto el capitulo, yo estaba un poco en duda si les gustaria o no, yo se que te he dejado intrigada, pero tratare de subir el otro pronto.
Gracias por seguir la historia y por tu comentario.
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Gosh, I’ve missed this story. You’re one hell of a writer. This chapter has left me too stress to go to bed.
Please post soon.
Hi Deanna:
Wow, I’m sorry for the cliffhanger, but if I would continue the chapter would be too long.
I’m glad, though, you like it.
I’ll try to post soon
Thanks for your comment.
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