Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, November 8, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 19: FOR A FEW SECONDS

    Tina: “yes, this, if you change the color of the hair and eyes I will swear it’s the picture of Marcus”

    Bette was shocked, Marcus is the man she thought was Tina’s boyfriend, and even though her girlfriend already explained to her that the man was like her brother, Bette is still a little jealous; her memory brought the old picture Dawn gave her in Santa Martha,

    Bette: “you told me that my mom raised him, do you know if he was orphan?”

    Tina: “no, Maxine is very private in those things…, why?”

    Bette: “because he may be a relative…, maybe even my brother”

    Tina: “I don’t think he’s Maxine’s son, but… yeah,  he may be your brother…, how could we find out?”

    Bette: “Kit, I need to ask Kit about that”

    Tina: “are you sure? Don’t you think she will know that Louise you and I know many other details?”

    Bette: “shit…, we have to talk to Louise and work this together”

    As they were talking, Maryann called her through the intercom.

    Maryann: “Dr. Porter, Jodi was looking for you”

    Bette: “I know, she was at the lobby”

    Maryann: “after that, Dr. Porter, she came back and you weren’t in your office, she wanted to talk to you, she’ll come back later”

    Bette: “did she say what she wants?”

    Maryann: “no, but she wasn’t alone, she came with Kelly Freemont, they were talking about a party, I believe”

    Bette: “a party? Did they mention where?”

    Maryann: “no, but Jodi was asking about your assistant Dr. Kennard”

    Bette: “what did she ask?”

    Maryann: “her name, how she came here and some other weird questions”

    Bette: “weird questions? Like what?”

    Maryann: “well…, if you come or leave with Dr. Kennard”

    Bette: “does she usually ask things like that?”

    Maryann: “not very often, she always comes around here, I usually ask her what she’s looking for and she says she’s just walking around”

    Bette: “hmm, for how long has she been doing that?”

    Maryann: “for a few months, I think since January”

    Bette: “okay, thank you, Maryann”

    Maryann: “what should I tell her if she comes back again?”

    Bette: “tell her that I don’t want to talk with her, that I’m busy, whatever, just send her away”

    Comments

    1. Hola proteonomics que sorpresa cuando ví el capítulo me encantó pero me dejas intrigada con el
      final gracias y esperando el
      siguiente capítulo

      • Hola Escorpion:

        Que bien leer que te gusto el capitulo ojala pueda subir el siguiente pronto.

        Gracias por tu comentario y por seguir esta historia.

        P

    2. Oh no….Melvin is about to see Tina! This does not sound good. I still do not know why Melvin should not know that Tina is at the company, but that is what everyone including Bette has indicated. What a drama!!!

      This was a very good chapter. Glad the girls got away from the bank without being detected. The plan worked well.

      Now, what in the hell is Fay Buckley been up to? Buckley, Fremont and Learner have been trailing after Bette for six months. What are they up to? It appears that Aaron has been working for Buckley instead of the other way around.

      This is an intriguing story and I want to know more. Thank you for this chapter and I hope the you can give us more soon.

      • Hi Martha:

        Yes, we still don’t know what is the problem with Melvin seeing Tina, but the concern is different with Bette than with Kit and the old generation. Bette fears that her father will use Tina against her, but Kit, Peggy have other motivations to avoid Melvin to see Tina, that is taylored with Melvin and Maxine’s pasts.

        Buckley is an important piece in this puzzle, and she will reveal something to Malvin very soon.

        Thank you for reading and commenting.

        P

    3. Hi proteonomics,

      What a fantastic chapter!

      Glad the girls were out of the building before Melvin and his man got to the bank. They are so clever!

      I am almost feeling sorry for Aaron, he surely will not survive this. So, he is the one working for Faye Buckley? We already knew Kelly and Jodi work for her. The bitches, i hope they get what they deserve. Stupid woman.

      Please let Tina stay hidden from Melvin, they can’t meet. Melvin will do anything to protect him self and if he can use Tina to get Bette he will do it.

      Please update asap!

      • Hi Bibi:

        I’m glad you like the chapter.

        Yes, Tina should stay in the closet, but who is going to help her?

        The good thing is that Bette is on her way to her office.

        I believe that Aaron will survive, he is receiving a dose of his own concoction.

        I hope to post soon the next chapter.

        Thanks, my friend for reading and commenting.

        P

    Leave a Reply