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Badlands – Chapter 10
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“Listen, you have me…” She said. Today is full of surprises. “You’ve got a first class minder behind you…” She said rather proudly; and she is right. She stood up and I know that nothing I say will make her stay anymore; so I let her go to whatever she is up to.
“Thanks Jenny…” I said.
“Don’t thank me yet…” She said as she open the door. I didn’t know what she means but I know somehow it made sense in her complex mind. I snickered and watch her go. For a while I sat alone in the living room; didn’t what to do and what to say when I see her.
“Well well… look at you…” Alice said to me as I entered her car. I called her earlier today and asked if she doesn’t mind picking me up and she doesn’t. “You look like you’re gonna propose to her…” She said to me as I put on my seatbelt now. “Wait! Are you??” She asked seriously and looked at me.
“No! Jesus… I just… wanna look good…” I said. I looked down at my self. The pin stripe three piece suit that I love and with my black classic oxford shoes. My hair is combed back as it used to be. Ah… this felt good. I felt a bit… how do you say it… bad? I was going to win my woman back.
“You’re not bad your self…” I said and she smiled that goofy grin of hers.
“Thanks! I got these jeans at……… you don’t wanna hear it, do you?” She asked me; I looked at her expressionless.
“No; not really…” I said.
“Yeah… thought so…” She said quietly and faced back to the road; focused on her driving.
“So Uhh… why the dress up?” She asked me.
“Me and Carmen… we had a fight…” I said and it worries me that I’d say it. “She asked me to meet her family and I said no… And she also knows I’m hiding something from her; so I’m pretty much in the shit house…” I said. I looked at her curiously. “You didn’t say anything to her did you?” My voice was mean and low. She turned and looked at me and a few times and back on to the road.
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I really loved and enjoyed reading this chapter. I know we shouldn’t praise violence, but nevertheless I liked the tough Shane =P I think Carmen should have thought about her descision before she says yes, but as you already said – they are too much in love. anyway…i hope you’re going to post (very) soon !
wow… i love it! your story is so different and i like it a lot… i want a happy end for them.. if i cant get it on tv, maybe i can get it here!update soon, please!
What everybody else said.. Great.
oh thank good! But I guess somethings going to happen soon or later…But please I want a Sharmen Happy End!!!Great story by the way!
Mmm… this is all good, but I’m wondering about Jenny… somehow she seems up to no good, but maybe I’m being paranoid some ?
oh! I love it soooooo much! I mean, it’s too cool… and u ARE a GENIUS! I mean, ur writing is wonderful! Shane told Carmen the truth… she was too sweet and Carmen was sweet too! Please, post soon!!!!!!! They r great together… and Alice, I just adore her… when she thought Shanw was going to propose! Well, wouldn’t be a bad idea…
awesome. this story is fantastic. thank god Carmen decided to stay with shane. great writing!
Wooo!!!! This was intense! I love Shane as a tough girl who isn’t putting up with any crap. I’m so happy Carmen knows and wants to still be with her. UPDATE QUICKLY!
Whew! Carmen knows and the world is still spinning. Even though she’s decided to stay with Shane, Carmen still needs to let this all sink in. Then there’s Jenny…who knows what’s really going through her mind. Even though she is supposed to be protecting Shane she still takes her orders from Shane’s dad, so if he finds out that Carmen knows there may be nothing Shane can do….but now I’m getting ahead of the story and actually starting to freak myself out. This story is great…it’s got my mind working overtime! PPS!
Fuckin’ genius baby!! BUT I fill somethin’ iz about to happen to my girlz Shane and Carmen . . . Like alwayz from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!!