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Badlands – Chapter 10
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“Uhm; you threatened to kill me if I slip anything out… I may have a big mouth but I still prefer my fucking life…” She said. “Besides; I knew Carmen somehow would realize something’s not right… she’s a smart girl…” She said; turning the cornier and I could see the line forming out side the Planet.
“She is…” I said quietly.
“Then; what are you gonna say to her… you think the suit gonna help?” She said and parked her car.
“Well I gotta try something…” I said foolishly.
I kept my eyes on her all night. I saw the other ladies trying to get her drinks and she accepts them all kindly. Look at her; with those short shorts she has on and that top that shows all the right curves on her. Her skin glowing under the dark lit lights… I couldn’t take my eyes off her.
I stayed away from Alice and the others and continued sitting my self at the bar where I can get a clear view of her. Does she know that I am here? Waiting for her? I think she does; I hope she does… because I don’t mind doing this the rest of my life. McCutcheon; get a fucking grip.
I looked at my surroundings; the preying eyes on my women. I let them do it. I’ve declined unknown numbers of girls coming up to me; asking me to dance with them; have a drink; have a chat. I only let Alice come up to me and she and I would have a short conversation and she would be off again with her close friends and especially with that tennis chick. They should just get a room; those two.
One point during the night our eyes met. We have the most intense stare with each other. I swear it can burn the room up. I love every single second of it. But I can sense the hurt… the pain that I did onto her. I know she keep on having quick looks at me. Though I feel the stare from unknown eyes on Carmen but they never made their moves to her; it confuses me… it’s like they know she’s with someone. Maybe they can tell from our looks to each other.
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I really loved and enjoyed reading this chapter. I know we shouldn’t praise violence, but nevertheless I liked the tough Shane =P I think Carmen should have thought about her descision before she says yes, but as you already said – they are too much in love. anyway…i hope you’re going to post (very) soon !
wow… i love it! your story is so different and i like it a lot… i want a happy end for them.. if i cant get it on tv, maybe i can get it here!update soon, please!
What everybody else said.. Great.
oh thank good! But I guess somethings going to happen soon or later…But please I want a Sharmen Happy End!!!Great story by the way!
Mmm… this is all good, but I’m wondering about Jenny… somehow she seems up to no good, but maybe I’m being paranoid some ?
oh! I love it soooooo much! I mean, it’s too cool… and u ARE a GENIUS! I mean, ur writing is wonderful! Shane told Carmen the truth… she was too sweet and Carmen was sweet too! Please, post soon!!!!!!! They r great together… and Alice, I just adore her… when she thought Shanw was going to propose! Well, wouldn’t be a bad idea…
awesome. this story is fantastic. thank god Carmen decided to stay with shane. great writing!
Wooo!!!! This was intense! I love Shane as a tough girl who isn’t putting up with any crap. I’m so happy Carmen knows and wants to still be with her. UPDATE QUICKLY!
Whew! Carmen knows and the world is still spinning. Even though she’s decided to stay with Shane, Carmen still needs to let this all sink in. Then there’s Jenny…who knows what’s really going through her mind. Even though she is supposed to be protecting Shane she still takes her orders from Shane’s dad, so if he finds out that Carmen knows there may be nothing Shane can do….but now I’m getting ahead of the story and actually starting to freak myself out. This story is great…it’s got my mind working overtime! PPS!
Fuckin’ genius baby!! BUT I fill somethin’ iz about to happen to my girlz Shane and Carmen . . . Like alwayz from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!!