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Badlands – Chapter 11
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She turned and faced the two of us; she was looking at me and looked surprised; she couldn’t close her mouth. I looked over at Carmen and she was grinning at Alice.
I looked at Alice again and her face was still surprised and her mouth is still opened.
“What’s wrong with you??” I asked. I looked at Carmen again. “And why are you grinning…” I asked her.
“Uhh… Shane… Uhm… You’re…. Uhh; you’re not…” Then she was pointing at me; I raised an eyebrow and continued to look at her. I still didn’t get it.
“What?!”
“You’re…” Her hand was touching her t-shirt yanking at it with her finger tips. “You’re-you’re-you’re not…” She stuttered quickly. I looked down at my self and realized what she was on about. I was topless.
“Shit…” I hissed quickly and looked for my shirt on the somewhere on the floor. I was a little bit flustered about it. I quickly put it on and buttoned it up; Carmen was trying to hide her laugh; covering her mouth with her hands. I saw her body shaking.
“Alice; please stop imagining my girlfriend topless…” Carmen said in a laugh. I looked on the floor and run my hand through my hair. I looked at Alice and she still has that face on.
“Oh; stop it…” I said to her.
“I can’t help it!” She said to me and looked over at her friend. “I’m so jealous of you… you get to sleep with yummy body every night???” She talked to Carmen like I’m not there and hopped on the bed.
“Mmm hmm… don’t be jealous…” Carmen teased. “She is rather yummy, isn’t she?” and both of them looked at me. The two of them were eyeing me up and down intensely at me; with only my brief and shirt on and my hands on my hips. I was getting a little uncomfortable.
“Okay… this is a little weird…” I said. I looked around to look for my pants; I got closer to the bed and picked my pants up. I can feel their eyes on me; I put my pants on in front of them and zipped them up. I looked up to see them still in the same state.
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Holy shit! Gabriel, huh? Damn! I really liked this chapter and I liked the beginning of it very much.. It was nice to see things from Carmen’s POV. You should do that more. And PPS!
Oh man, you know it can’t be good if Gabe came all the way to LA. You have to post the next chapter soon!!! I need to know what happens!!! AAAHHHH…
gosh i luv ur story, its so creative and original! plz plz plz! post the next chapter, i just cant wait
oh my God… Shane’s dad… hope he will be good with Carmen… I was thinking, Alice&Jenny?? That would be really interesting… oh my god, but now Shane has to tell her dad she’s got a girlfriend!!!! Post soon, please! (Like always, you’re very QUICKLY!)
Meh ! I don’t like Gabe and right now, I don’t like Jenny very much either !
aww…i hope gabe won’t cause problems…i want carmen and shane to be happy
amazing! I can’t wait what good old Gabe is going to do…
Oh boy. The next chapter should be really interesting. Love it!
wow , that was really good.I love the Alice incident…lol . Gabe with his bodyguards…….it can’t be sth good.But isn’t it dangerous for him to come down to LA , i mean the Peabody family could have followed him and find out where Shane is? Anyway , s I said really really good( i like the way Shane explains to Carmen everything) and pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease post soon!!!!!
HEY! nice chapter! and what a surprise,Gabe is in town… i think this situation is kind of dangerous… maybe he wants to take Shane with him.. mmm.. i prefer not thinking about that.Ahh, by the way, what are you talking about “my writer brain”… c’mon, you can control your brain! just a happy ending, ok? post soon!
great story – wonder what her dad is going to say… drama drama drama… awesome..looking forward to more updates of this and your other one…. please post mroe sooooooooooon xx