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    Before the Fall – Four

    Story written on November 17, 2006 by Speed_Racer.
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    If you loved someone how far would you go, to get them to love you back? What if they never loved you?

    “Well? Answer me! ”

    “We don’t think so. I mean I don’t know. I guess you know…they’re gonna have to run some tests to see,” Alice muttered warily.

    “Where’s Tina?” Helena finally asked the question that had been gnawing at her.

    “She was out of town but she’s on her way back,” Carmen said stroking her hand up and down Shane’s arm.

    “Did you talk to her?” Shane asked glancing at Helena.

    Helena clenched her jaw tight for a moment before she looked up and met Shane’s eyes.

    “Are you implying something?” she asked coolly.

    Shane leaned forward in her seat dislodging Carmen’s hand and glared at Helena.

    “We all know how Bette gets after she talks to you, Helena. So did you or did you not talk to her?”

    “If you’re implying that this is my fault then you are mistaken. My powers of persuasion are quite…lacking in regards to Bette, Shane. And for your information we did talk last night.”

    “And what? Did you do one of your classic guilt trips?” Shane steam rolled on.

    “What are you talking about? Shane I’ve never guilted Bette into anything. I understand that you’re upset but this isn’t my fault. I wasn’t even here! We talked but that’s it. I’m not going to say that Bette wasn’t a bit upset but not upset enough to drive around recklessly.”

    “You don’t even know how she’s been,” Shane snapped. “You haven’t even been here! So when you say she was upset you don’t know what that means, because you haven’t been here.”

    “I am not going to leave if that’s what you want,” Helena snapped back.

    “No one’s asking you to leave, Helena. We’re all tense right now. Tempers are short. We’ve been sitting in these damn chairs for hours. Let’s just try and stay calm,” Alice said trying to be the voice of reason.

    Helena blew out an angry breath and glared one last time at Shane who glared right back.

    “I’m sure Bette wouldn’t want us at each other’s throats,” Lara said to break the tense silence.

    “I’m going to see if I can find out what’s going on,” Helena said abruptly and rose to her feet.

    “I’ll come with you,” Dana announced jumping to her feet. She sent a smile to Lara and followed Helena down the hall.

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    3. Just caught up with your story! This is amazing stuff babe! And you know what I like about it the best? The bloody long chapters!!! :) Despite this I still agree with the people who seem to still think it’s too short….I’m so feeling it for Helena…poor thing! I like you character depictions babe…PPS ok :)

    5. Too short Speedy. Please post soon. Why are the girls, Shane, so mad at Helena? Why should Helena stay around an unrequited(sp) love? Will you fill in some of the blanks over the past five years since the love confession and the move? Please post soon.

    7. Good God, I didnt see THAT coming! Its a tad sad to see Helena on the receiving on of so much resentment, and with this new turn, sheesh! poor Helena! Anyhoo, brilliant writing indeed. Thanks for this and do post soon!

    10. Wow, Speed Racer ! How thrilling is this story ?!! I think I need to breathe too now… DRAMA ! DRAMA ! DRAMA ! I have no idea where you’re going to take us with this, but I simply love it, love it, love it ! And you’re such a fantaaaastic author ! I just can’t wait for your next chapter. Please, keep sharing your tremendous talent… Thanks a lot !

    11. WOW. Looks like something is going to hit the fan and it not what I think it is. Everyone seen so angry with Helena now how will the feel? Very bitter. thanks

    14. So now i’m all caught up i just have to say what a bloody great writer you are! Seriously, just brilliant, completely loving this story, waiting anxiously for more! Thank you.

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