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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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Smiling
slowly, Helena opened her mouth to reply but the doorbell rang for an
unwelcome interruption and her brow furrowing, she wondered who it
could be. “I’ll get it, babies,” she murmured to her children who
looked back at her with expectant expressions, waiting for her to say
something. As she hurried downstairs, she couldn’t help but shudder on
hearing Alice and the children singing along with Floop. She didn’t
care what anyone said, that song was truly disturbing and an obvious
mind control technique. When she got to the front door she hoped it
would be Mormons or perhaps Girl Scouts selling cookies but instead she
found Winnie who didn’t bother with a greeting before she pushed her
way past Helena and into the house. “Hello to you too,” said Helena,
voice dripping with sarcasm.
The
sarcasm was lost on Winnie who was already heading upstairs, looking as
if she was on a mission of some sort. Sighing deeply and moving in a
quick run after her, Helena prayed that Winnie wouldn’t embarrass her
with Alice as she had done with Tina. Part of her felt that perhaps the
reason her relationship with the blonde hadn’t gone anywhere was the
fact that it was weighed down by her past with Winnie. Divorce, child
custody, and fighting with your former partner almost constantly were
certainly not things that tended to make a new relationship appealing.
And while her intentions with Alice were friendly she could feel them
turning into something else. The writer was so terribly kind to her it
was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as
Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of
falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more
time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice
Pieszecki to be.
When
she got to the top of the stairs, she saw the children snuggled on
either side of Alice, focused on Winnie who knelt in front of them
regaling them with an endless line of activities she had planned. The
blonde sensed Helena’s arrival and looked at her with wide eyes that
were confused and worried at the same time. Noticing Alice’s movement,
both the children followed suit and grinned at her.
“Mummy!” Wilson called out. “Can we go Disney Land? Mommy wants to take us. We can see Space Mountain, it’s open again!”
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.