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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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“And
Splash Mountain!” Jun Ying added, squirming around to kneel on the
couch and face Helena who was walking towards them. Between the two
children, it was Jun Ying who favored water rides the best. “Mommy says
you get really wet on it!”
“I’m
sure Mummy will agree to let us go,” said Winnie, her eyes flashing a
subtle warning at Helena and reaching out to lightly touch the small of
the children’s backs. “Why wouldn’t she when she knows what fun we’ll
have?”
“Babies,”
said Helena warmly, smiling at them and stroking their cheeks. “Would
you do Mummy a favor and show Alice your rooms? She’s been asking to
see them because of how well I said you helped with all the
decorations.” Her smile growing a bit strained and it showing in her
voice, Helena murmured, “Could you do that for me, please?”
“Okay,
Mummy,” chimed Wilson and Jun Ying together, taking Alice’s hands in
each of theirs and tugging her away. The blonde shot a worried glance
backwards at Helena who gave her a wavering smile of reassurance that
didn’t work too well on reassuring the writer at all.
They
were in the middle of the tour of Jun Ying’s room when they heard
Winnie’s voice become raised and at this, Wilson flinched visibly then
scooted closer to Alice. The tour continued, with Jun Ying showing
Alice her toy piano and her eyes going wide with excitement when the
blonde told her she used to play in a band and could teach her how to
play piano and maybe the guitar if she wanted. Jun Ying confessed
Helena was already teaching her piano but the guitar sounded so much
cooler to learn. After saying this she asked Alice worriedly if her
Mummy would be hurt by her saying the guitar is cooler. At which, the
writer felt her heart melt as she reassured Jun Ying that everyone,
including Helena, knew the guitar was an innately cooler instrument
than the piano so it was okay to think that.
A
few moments passed and Winnie’s voice became raised several more times
and Alice noticed Wilson seemed to withdraw with each one. Jun Ying
appeared not to notice or was simply good at ignoring it. She announced
she had to pee and ran off to do so only to return seconds later,
saying that the soap was too high for her to reach. Asking Alice to
bring it down for her before she went to the bathroom because it was
icky to not wash your hands after. Her Mummy had taught her that.
Chuckling and agreeing with Helena absolutely, Alice went to retrieve
the soap and chuckled again upon being shooed away by Jun Ying. The
chuckles stopped when she returned to the little girl’s room and found
that Wilson was gone.
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.