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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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Peering
down the hallway and relieved to see he wasn’t spying on Helena and
Winnie whose argument was slowly but surely getting louder and more
agitated, Alice headed to his bedroom that they had passed on the way
to Jun Ying’s. Hoping that maybe he was inside of there, waiting to
give her a tour of it himself. Only when she walked inside there wasn’t
anyone there. At least, that’s how it appeared at first. Then she heard
the slightest scratching noise. The sound of somehow shifting around
and looking at Wilson’s bed that was covered with a Justice League
bedspread, Alice thought back to her parents divorce and the time just
before it. How when they would fight much like Winnie and Helena were
doing right now, except far louder and with much less self control, she
would hide underneath her bed in a futile attempt to hide from the fact
that the fight was happening.
Somehow
she thought Wilson might be the same way and that’s why Alice crouched
to her knees and pulled up the bedspread to peer underneath the bed.
Locking eyes with a very wary Wilson who met her stare with a sad gaze.
“Hey,” murmured Alice, offering a smile.
“Did
you get Jun Ying’s soap?” asked Wilson, his brow furrowing in a way
that reminded Alice utterly of Helena and made a lump form in her
throat. “It’s gross if you don’t have soap to wash your hands with.
Mummy told us so.”
“Yeah,
I got her soap,” Alice chuckled, greatly amused that both children had
now taken time to inform her of Helena’s thoughts on good hygiene. She
nodded at the bed and asked, “You mind if I join you? It looks
comfortable under there.”
“Okay,”
said Wilson as he shifted to the right to make room for Alice. When she
joined him after a few moments of squirming around to get comfortable,
he rested his chin on his folded arms then said quietly, “Mommy always
does this.”
Looking
away from the sparkling clean hardwood floor of Wilson’s room and
wishing her own bedroom had been nearly so clean when she did this as a
kid, Alice frowned slightly. Mommy meant Winnie and Mummy was Helena.
It took her a few seconds to realize that when Winnie first arrived and
she thought they had called her the same thing they did Helena. She
supposed it was a British thing, calling Helena their Mummy.
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.