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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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“What
does she do?” asked Alice gently. Not wanting to pry but it was kind of
clear Wilson wanted to talk to someone about this. If he didn’t then
why bring it up at all?
“They
have time planned,” Wilson informed Alice solemnly, looking at her with
brown eyes holding a little too much maturity for a child his age.
“Mummy explained it once. This week is our time with her and when our
time with Mummy is planned… Mommy shows up.”
“Maybe
it’s because she wants to spend more time with you?” asked Alice,
wondering what Wilson and Jun Ying made of this situation. She could
tell that Winnie needed the children for something but it wasn’t as if
she wanted them. There was an ulterior motive behind this visit besides
angering Helena though that was something she clearly enjoyed doing.
Shrugging
his small shoulders, Wilson put his chin back on his arms and said, “I
don’t know what Mommy wants. It makes Mummy sad though.” He kept
looking forward and paused then said, his voice thick, “She gets sad
when we aren’t with her. I can tell because of how she is when we leave
for Mommy’s. She doesn’t like us being gone.”
“Your
Mummy loves you a lot, that’s all,” Alice murmured, biting her bottom
lip and hoping she was saying the right thing. She reached out to
lightly rub Wilson’s back and was rewarded by him looking at her and
smiling lightly. She grinned at him and grabbed his nose and moved her
face close to his as she drawled, “She loves you enough to watch Floop
in Spy Kids, doesn’t she? And I think we all know how much he creeps
her out by now.”
“Mummy
is silly!” Wilson declared with some good natured exasperation,
squirming around to face Alice and waving his hands. “Floop isn’t bad.
It’s Minion who’s bad. You can tell because of how he acts. I mean,” he
huffed slightly and rolled over on his back, poking at the mattress to
his bed. “Batman could tell Minion was bad in two seconds, that’s how
bad he is.”
“Minion
is totally bad,” agreed Alice seriously, doing her level best to not
smile in amusement at Wilson’s antics and not getting anywhere in her
attempt.
Wilson opened his mouth to reply but froze and his tiny hand whipped
out to cover Alice’s mouth who lifted both her eyebrows in surprise at
this action. “Jun’s coming,” Wilson hissed, reminding Alice of Helena
yet again when he said this and then a gleefully sneaky smile formed on
his features. “Lets pretend we aren’t here.” Alice, her mouth still
covered by his hand, nodded in silent agreement. Causing Wilson to
exclaim quietly, “This will be cool.”
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.