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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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They
remained completely silent, frozen in their respective positions, Alice
lying on her stomach and facing forward, Wilson lying on his back and
tilting his head back to stare at the front of his bedspread, hand
covering Alice’s mouth. The sound of Jun Ying closing the door met
their ears then her walking into the room and muttering to herself,
“They aren’t here either?” She sighed heavily and they heard her plunk
herself into Wilson’s bean bag as she said, “Where did stupid Wilson
take her?”
“I’m
not stupid!” Wilson cried in outrage, removing his hand from Alice’s
mouth and whipping up the edge of the bedspread to poke his head out
and glare at his sister.
“You’re
kind of stupid,” said Jun Ying, laughing and running over to them,
falling to her knees to grin at her brother. “You just fell for my
trick for like… the millionth time. I always find where you’re hiding
if I make fun of you, Wilson.”
“You
cheat,” declared Wilson with a scowl, reminding Alice for the third
consecutive time of his mother. He scooted back under the bed and
narrowed his eyes at Jun Ying. “Batman wouldn’t cheat like that to find
me. He’d use his detective skills.”
On
her hands and knees, Jun Ying laughed again and said, “I’m not Batman
so tricking you is fair and square.” She then turned her attention to
Alice and stated, “You’re in my spot.”
“Oh,
I am, am I?” asked Alice, a smile slowly spreading and her hands shot
out to grab Jun Ying and pull her under the bed. “Let me apologize for
that most terrible of offenses by tickling you!” She looked over an
already giggling Jun Ying to Wilson and said with overly polite airs,
“Mr. Wilson? Would you care to help me apologize to your sister?”
“I’d
love to,” said Wilson, putting on a decent British accent that Alice
figured had to come from spending time with Helena’s side of the family.
The
joint tickling assault on Jun Ying lasted for five minutes until Alice
and Wilson tired of the game. After which, they spent a few minutes
discussing Spy Kids and how non-scary Floop was and how silly Helena
really was for being freaked out by him. Then they decided to grab a
flashlight from Wilson’s night stand drawer and his pack of Spiderman
Uno cards.
That’s
how Helena found them when she entered the room twenty minutes later.
She was tired and weary from her argument with Winnie whose impulsive
desire to spend time with the children had come from the fact that the
woman she had been dating, for only a week no less, expressed a desire
to see them today. After threatening to call her lawyer to have him
explain to Winnie yet again what joint custody meant and what the rules
of their temporary agreement entailed, the other woman had given up.
But not after calling Helena some nasty names and saying this wasn’t
over. To which Helena replied this would never be over since they had
children together and Winnie was merely stating the obvious.
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.