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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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She
felt worn down by yet another hostile encounter with a woman she had
once loved so very much and saddened that things between them had
disintegrated to this level. These were feelings that evaporated the
instant she walked into Wilson’s room and was met with the sound of
Alice, Wilson, and Jun Ying talking and laughing. They were all
underneath his bed, which she knew to be the traditional hiding spot
for the siblings when she and Winnie would quarrel. Unlike the times
before though, the children weren’t quietly murmuring amongst
themselves, they were laughing and clearly having a good time.
Something Helena knew without a doubt was because they had Alice with
them.
Once again, Helena felt those feelings of friendship turn into something else.
“Uno!”
announced Jun Ying in jubilant tones and this was immediately followed
by the sound of her smacking a card down then Alice and Wilson groaning
together.
“Your
sister is totally cheating somehow,” Alice remarked to Wilson, putting
on the fake airs of someone suspecting a conspiracy was afoot. “We just
haven’t figured out how.”
“I
know!” cried Wilson in agreement and Helena smiled on hearing him
gather up the cards and reshuffle them. “She always wins at this plus
hide and seek.”
“I
don’t cheat,” said Jun Ying, exasperated but good natured at the same
time. “You both just stink at this game.” She paused to giggle then
added mischievously, “Really stink. Like people who don’t wash their
hands after peeing stink.”
“You’re
going to get tickled again if you keep that kind of talk up,” warned
Alice, clearly addressing Jun Ying who simply giggled at this supposed
threat. “And Wilson and I won’t go easy on you like we did the last
time. We’ll make you laugh so much you pee your pants and your Mom had
to have told you how nasty something like that is.”
“Ewww!” Jun Ying exclaimed in disgust. “That’s gross!”
“That’s
awesome,” proclaimed Wilson, laughing in delight and most likely
exchanging high fives with Alice as Helena heard the sound of hands
slapping together.
Unable
to continue the ruse of not being in the room, no matter how darling
she did find their interaction, Helena walked over to the bed and
lifted up the Justice League bedspread to give Alice and the children
with a clear view of her stocking clad legs and feet covered in one of
her pairs of Manolo Blahnik black high heels. “Would all of you prefer
to remain in this cave like dwelling or would you care to venture out
for a spot of ice cream?” she drawled.
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.