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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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“Ice
cream!” Jun Ying and Wilson shouted happily together, squirming out
from under the bed and pulling themselves totally out from under it by
grabbing on Helena’s legs and tugging their small bodies forward.
Something
that Helena was used to and purposefully planted her legs firmly in
order to help them with this needed task. “Put on your shoes, babies,”
Helena chuckled, returning their hugs and smiling warmly at them. “You
left them by the front door, remember?”
“We
remember,” said Jun Ying and Wilson in chorus, hurrying out of the room
and downstairs, obviously thrilled at the prospect of getting ice cream
as most children would be.
A
few more moments passed and when Alice didn’t emerge out from under the
bed, Helena crouched down to peer under it, immediately locking eyes
with the blonde upon doing so. “Do you plan on leaving this place?” she
asked humorously. “Or don’t you enjoy ice cream?”
“Of course I like ice cream,” said Alice, a very evident ‘duh’ in her
voice. “I was attempting to be gentlemanly,” she said with exaggerated
grumpiness. “I can see now what that gets me. Unjust efforts at making
funnery.”
Arching an eyebrow on hearing such an absurd made up phrase, Helena
said with a playful lilt in her voice, “And how exactly were you
attempting to be gentlemanly, darling?”
Looking at Helena as if she said she was on crack, Alice shook her head
and said, “Oh my dear Ms. Peabody. Don’t tell me you don’t know?” When
Helena continued to look at her expectantly, she grinned and scooted
forward to put their faces centimeters apart, causing Helena to shiver
at the warm feeling of Alice’s breath on her skin. “You’re wearing a
skirt and I’m lying in the center of where this bed is and you were
standing directly in front of me. If I moved forward and just happened
to look up what would I see?”
Helena immediately reddened as she realized what Alice’s view would
have been of then she was relieved to recall that she was wearing one
of her nicer pairs of black silk panties instead of one of the pairs of
cotton briefs she owned. Then she cursed herself for thinking such
things when Alice was her friend, only her friend, and someone not at
all ready for any type of real romantic relationship as she hadn’t
begun to truly get over the end of the one with Dana.
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.