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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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“Cheeky
girl,” Helena finally accused with a chuckle, fondly pinching Alice’s
cheek for good measure and standing up and walking off to the left side
of the bed so the blonde might finally exit from under it.
“My cheeks do rule me,” replied Alice, grinning and rotating her neck
to get the cricks out. Shaking out her arms as she remarked, “I think
half my body fell asleep under there. Maybe I can use that as an excuse
about why I lost like ten games of Uno in a row to your six year old
daughter.” She groaned in pleasure when her neck cracked loudly,
causing Helena to wince at the sound. “I doubt anyone would believe me
though. I suck at card games, big time. We used to have annual poker
night, me and my friends, and I’d always lose.”
“My father and grandfather taught me splendidly well when it comes to
cards,” said Helena, smiling when Alice met their eyes. “If you like, I
could teach you. I rather think it’s grandfather who managed to make
Jun Ying into the shark she is now. They tend to disappear in his den
and when I go to check up on them there is always a variety of poker
chips lying about. Ones that they valiantly try to hide under cushions
and such.”
“Sounds fun,” Alice said, grinning big.
Returning the grin but softer and more subdued, Helena opened her mouth
to try and say how much she appreciated what Alice did. How she made
the children feel better, helped them to somehow forget she was
obviously fighting with Winnie in the other room, and ask what she
might do to somehow make things equal between them. To say how grateful
she truly was. But before she could even begin to get the words out,
Jun Ying and Wilson rushed into the room, Wilson taking her hand and
Jun Ying taking Alice’s, both of them proclaiming they needed to hurry
up before all the ice cream melted.
And then, sadly, the moment was lost.
—
Several hours later with the children in bed and sleeping for at least
over an hour, Helena found the moment again. They were settled on the
couch again, aimlessly talking and flipping television channels when
Alice happened upon a commercial for some 80s compilation cd she wanted
to buy. This led her to talk about her teenage years and then reveal
quietly how her father had slowly but surely disappeared from her life.
After she said this, she smiled sadly at Helena and pulled her left leg
close to her body, resting her chin on her knee then saying that the
British woman would never do that to her kids as she was a good parent.
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.