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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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“You would be a tremendous parent,” Helena said, words rushing out in
an overly eager manner that made her blush as Alice looked obviously
taken aback. Looking away from the blonde and biting the inside of her
cheek, she quietly cleared her throat then continued, more subdued,
“The way you made the children forget that Winnie and I were
quarreling? That’s something only a person who truly cares for children
and is good with them could do. To help a child to forget something
which worries or frightens them is quite possibly one of the most
difficult tasks in this world to accomplish.”
She heard the sound of Alice scooting closer on the couch then she felt
the touch of a soft hand squeezing her shoulder. Turning to look at the
blonde and smiling on realizing the writer again had her arm around her
shoulders, Helena sighed on seeing she hadn’t truly frightened Alice
off. She was scared her words might be construed as a type of come on,
something that happened fairly often with Tina and other women as well.
Somehow what she said tended to have a flirting connotation that she
really didn’t intend for it to hold. It was more than a little
bothersome at times, especially in social situations like this.
“I never wanted kids,” murmured Alice, resting her head on Helena’s
shoulder, staring ahead at the television. “My parents fought just
constantly and I figured since I grew up with that and it’s all I knew
maybe I would… I dunno, pass that onto the kids. Like I would end up
fighting with whoever I was raising them with. Or that I would make
them feel ***** the same way my mom has a way of doing.”
“What does your mother do?” questioned Helena softly, feeling
comfortable asking this only because Alice already knew the shoddy
state of her own relationship with her mother.
“I dunno,” Alice sighed heavily, snuggling into Helena and peering up
at her with wide brown eyes that struck the British woman dumb, they
reminded her so much of Wilson. “She digs at how I dress, the make up I
use, the way I say things, just tiny things like that. All of that
naturally ingrained stuff that makes you doubt yourself as a person.”
“That’s dreadful,” murmured Helena, stroking Alice’s messy blonde hair
and smiling when the writer moved closer yet. There was hardly any
space between their bodies and though Helena knew she really shouldn’t
enjoy it this much, she couldn’t quite help herself. “I’m sorry,
darling.”
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.