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Blind (Chap 14)
Bette
The door clicking opened, revealing Tina in a low cut, tight body hugging shirt. She looked at me expectantly…
“Well?”
I tried to find my voice… and before the word ‘Sexy’ left my mouth… “Wow, you look really good in it…” ‘And way hot too…’
“Is it?” asked Tina while looking at my expression… wow, I couldn’t help it, everything she wears also wow me so much, I guess it’s shown on my face too.
“Bette, I cannot go shopping with you anymore if you keep telling me that on every outfit that I tried and with that look too…”
I looked at her in disbelief; did she just tell me she doesn’t like to go shopping with me? “What?” I couldn’t help but felt really disappointed.
“Haha, I will be broke if I buy every outfit that I tried.”
“Oh ok, what if I buy it for you?”
Tina chuckled then “Nah, you won’t wanna be broke and then my closet gotten too stuffed up.”
Day after day, we went out like usual friends, to the movies, hanging out, shopping… every time when the nights ended, it left me frustrated… I need her… need her close… in my arms… kissing her… and… making love to her… ok, another cold shower. I bet my water supply bill would be gone high up this month.
“You know… some people have friends for sex… but both of you are like girlfriends… who are TOGETHER… and never have sex… or never even kissed… so what’s the deal with you two huh?” Alice with her correct ‘assumption’ at the right time… when I was so frustrated and eager to be with Tina.
“Al…” I think I really should tell someone before I exploded… “I really like her… a lot… err… I’m in love with her…”
Alice looked at me like ‘Duh…’ then I asked her “What?”
“Like that’s news… you seemed to be ‘in love’ with her since… well… since you were in the hospital Bette.”
“Al, you can take out the air quotation… I admit that it’s true that I’m in love with her… since I think the time I woke up from my coma…”
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(66 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
No, we are just beginning. Next chapter..PLEASE
No please don’t stop here! you are doing a great job all this time, your story is so lovely i think that there are a lot of story for this fiction!
Zabo, thank you so much for this chapter, that was so great and so well done! Loved the way Bette turned her jealousy and frustration into courage to ‘show’ Tina her feelings, and then how she chose to tell her truth! So amazing. But I’ve got to agree with all of the above, you cannot stop there… Please grant us with at least one more chapter, one of finally shared love, whatever rating you choose to give to it! ;) Please, please don’t end here… Thanks!
Oh no you don’t!That was Great! I’m with everyone else here…On with the sex!I think you can muster up a few more chappys after that!You are doing great, don’t stop PLEASE
NO ZABO! NO!
Did you say the end? I think not, you are banned to your room until you put out a few more chapters! That was a wonderful story and I would love to see it continue but you did bring the two girls together so what more could I ask for.
The end? Oh no! Tell me is isn’t so! That was great how Bette told Tina the truth without Tina even asking. Great story…I hope you will continue!
THIS CAN’T END!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Are you crazy? You just got these two together. Their passion is hot, you’ve got to keep going. (please)
wow
Oh hell no you can’t end it there! I vote for at least one more chapter. *cough*NC-17*cough* ;)
Great Story!!!!! Sorry to see it end. Thank you PPS
1st brb
Nooooooooooooooo!!! U can’t leave us hanging love that. Please. I need to read how wonderful it is and how they are now both complete, and yea a NC-17, pretty please!!
YES that was so great. Bette took the risk and NO not the end. Thanks for this great story
No not the end, please (pouty face)
lmao @ Alice ‘i think i’ve forgot to lock my door’ and then she pulled Dana out with her, i love the way Bette did her ‘truth’ please give us one more, i agree with Lament, we need an NC17
NO, NO NO NONONONONONONON….pls not the end!!!!
No way, don’t end it. Love the story.
I loved it, but I realy want it to continue… If it ends I’ll have nothing to jump up and down like a clown for :( Please continue :)
Zabo..I hope this is just the beginning. You can now start the sequel. Thank you for writing this story for us.
no no no not the end do you want me and you to fall out, well please coninue with this wonderful story
Oh man is sad to see this story ending, I though you gonna let them start their dating and first time make love and you know all the fun and hot stuff come. Anyway hope you will continue the story and please don’t ending like this, its killing us here. Good story and love it, thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see you soon, thanks!!!!!!!!!
no, not the end…please, continue, this is so good, i realy loved the way you finally made them to open up and see the truth…(love alice btw too)…so continue please and don’t even think of stopping here…thank you
Hell no!! give them some happy moments before happy ever after.
Brilliant. And SO worth the wait to see them get together so sweetly! Thanks.
Noooooooooo Zabo… Please… Not the end?! you can’t do that to me, I get back all excited to read an update and now ‘the end’? Please please please continue? *puppydogface*