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Crumbling Down
Either we didn’t notice or we didn’t care, but somehow during the walk home our hands had interlaced, and we walked like that all the way to our house. I certainly wasn’t expectin’ it, but as I make my way to my room I suddenly feel her arms around me in a tight hug and it felt good damn right. I could feel her heart beatin’ against me, I felt her take a step back, but she still didn’t say a word. She just looked up into my eyes and gave me one of the warmest smiles I’ve ever seen.
I step closer to her electricity jolting through my body as I turn her head up to my face and our lips are just centimeters from touching. She tilts her head and touches my arm gently. I’m burning up, breathing hard erratically, my heart pounding in my chest, my nipples hardened yearning for her touch. I’m so dizzy that I can’t think. That’s when I do it the thing I’ve been afraid I would do since she walked in the planet I kiss her.
Hesitatingly she moves her lips over mine as my tongue slowly slips out and flicks her lower lip urging her to open her mouth. She sticks her tongue in my mouth passionately kissing me. She moves her hands down to my hips pulling me closer while my hands are everywhere groping. I’m lost in her. I grab her ***** and grind to her. I’m completely disoriented by our bodies pressed together and how my hands feel running through the silky skin of her *****.
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(21 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
Although I really can’t get over the fact that Shane and Carmen belong together, I do like this fic tho. It’s interesting and I’m anxious to see where this is going. Good work!
I don´t know…..this story is so damn negative…don´t tkae it hard but I don´t really like it.
yeah, I know. It supose to be negative tough. It’s not meant for everyone to like. Thanks for leaving you opinion I appreciate it a lot.
This story was amazing. It was kind of negative but i loved it anyway. I really hope you continue this cause theres not many shane/jenny fics and this one was so good. I wanna know what happens to shane. Anyways good luck!!!
I’m sorry, don’t take it personal, but I can’t get with the whole Shane wanting to be with Jenny. I just think that Shane and Carmen belong together. . . . .
*I meant tight hugs,not tide… *blushes*
Well I guess I’ll make the difference;I liked it!I don’t know if Shane & Jenny will ever be an item,sleep together or something,but all the other things already exist;the broad smiles,the intense way the look each other,the tide hugs,the way they understand each other by just looking each other.And of course the fact that Shane would always be there for her.She is so relaxed,easy-going & she’s opening up because of Jenny,not Carmen.Carmen just happens to be the girl Shane’s with for now,happens to be around while Shane’s opening up.Carmen is just along for the ride,not driving,Jenny is.TaKe CaRe!