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Crumbling Down
Once again making her way trough the club Shane tries to spot Jenny. She manages to do so easily, provided the fact that Jenny is dancing on top of a table. As she comes down Shane grabs Jenny’s shoulder trying to get her attention “Maybe we should get you home now, Jen” she says. “Honestly, I’m fine.I just need another drinkUow” responds Jenny falling straight to the floor as she pulls away. “I guess maybe you should take me home” she says looking up sheepishly as Shane tried to get her up.
5) Letting go
Just as we were outside of the planet she started crying, part of me wanted to ask her what was wrong, but I knew it really wasn’t any of my business. Besides, when I cry, I definitely don’t like people gettin’ up in my face and askin’ me what’s wrong and all that *****. She told me anyway “I had a fight with Moira today. I don’t know where she went ” she said trailing off about their relationship. I felt so awkward standing there looking at her crying about Moira for god sake. I felt an urge to track Moira down and punch her in the face, but I couldn’t leave Jenny alone. She looked so dismantled and here I was standing lost in thought.
So I did the only thing I could think off, the only that came naturally, the only thing I seemed to do right I held her. Tight and close like all there was in the world was me and her, like everything would be all right. And though holding her shouldn’t be turning me on, and though she only meant it as comfort, I couldn’t help but feel for her once again. I heard her sniffle a few times before she finally looked up, paralyzing me with her blue eyes wet with tears. “Thanks.” she said quietly as she looked into my eyes. It looked like she wanted to say somethin’ more or like she was waitin’ for me to do or say something, so I did.
“Anytime you need.” I said gently, holding her face between my heads our eyes locked, so that she knew I was being honest with her. I couldn’t explain it then, but taking care of her or just holdin’ her, made me feel connected somehow. Actually, I think it was more for selfish reasons that I knew that I’d be there for her whenever she needed. It was simple really: I didn’t want anyone else to get as close to her as I had been, to have that mutual understanding. It felt special, and I wanted it to be just for me and her. So yes I would pull through for her, even tough it hurt me to do so.
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(21 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
Although I really can’t get over the fact that Shane and Carmen belong together, I do like this fic tho. It’s interesting and I’m anxious to see where this is going. Good work!
I don´t know…..this story is so damn negative…don´t tkae it hard but I don´t really like it.
yeah, I know. It supose to be negative tough. It’s not meant for everyone to like. Thanks for leaving you opinion I appreciate it a lot.
This story was amazing. It was kind of negative but i loved it anyway. I really hope you continue this cause theres not many shane/jenny fics and this one was so good. I wanna know what happens to shane. Anyways good luck!!!
I’m sorry, don’t take it personal, but I can’t get with the whole Shane wanting to be with Jenny. I just think that Shane and Carmen belong together. . . . .
*I meant tight hugs,not tide… *blushes*
Well I guess I’ll make the difference;I liked it!I don’t know if Shane & Jenny will ever be an item,sleep together or something,but all the other things already exist;the broad smiles,the intense way the look each other,the tide hugs,the way they understand each other by just looking each other.And of course the fact that Shane would always be there for her.She is so relaxed,easy-going & she’s opening up because of Jenny,not Carmen.Carmen just happens to be the girl Shane’s with for now,happens to be around while Shane’s opening up.Carmen is just along for the ride,not driving,Jenny is.TaKe CaRe!