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Crumbling Down
Story written on December 1, 2005 by Birdie.
Jenny walks slowly through the club her eyes searching, paying no attention to the beat pounding or the heads that turned her way. Frustrated on her search she goes straight over to the bar sits down on the stool, crossing her legs and leaning against the counter, givin a good shot of her ***** for the bartender. The girl takes one good look at Jenny and hands her a drink. “On the house.” She says winking.
Just as Jenny thought things might be brightening up, she heard a familiar voice calling her name. She knew this encounter was bound to happen but she didn’t want it to be so soon. Finishing her drink she ask the bartender for another while watching Carmen sit on the stool next to her and say her name again. “I heard you the first time” she manages to mutter while glaring the hot Latina girl. “Ok, its good to see your doing well” says Carmen noticing she’s unwelcome and standin up. “Yeah right” Jenny retorts rolling her eyes.
Shane tries to make it through the crowd looking for her girlfriend. She spots her talking to someone at the bar. Only as she approaches she realizes its Jenny. Suddenly the music on the background is barely loud enough to muffle her heartbeat and the passersby seem to be talking and laughing all at once in her ear. She shakes her head trying to break form her dizziness and takes firm steps toward the bar.
Carmen “I see you’re still acting weird. You know its kinda scary sometimes”. Jenny laughs saying “Yeah. Scary. That’s me ***** crazy ***** Jenny”. Just then Shane arrives at the bar. Jenny says “Always on the right time ahn Shane”, downs her drink and stands up, heading to the dance floor leaving a confused Shane behind. The club was filled with so many girls… they all smelled sweaty just as *****. Tonight she was going to get lost. Oh my god she loved this music, Trance was so hot thought Jenny.
“I wish to give, to take, to make, to check, I wanna see it happen I want to see, to be, the one that plays the game without no fears and regrets”
Jenny closed her eyes while sliding her hands through her short hair and neck, bittin her lips as she felt the rhythm of the song and mumbled the first words, every girl around her checking her out. Shane marched after her.
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(21 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
Although I really can’t get over the fact that Shane and Carmen belong together, I do like this fic tho. It’s interesting and I’m anxious to see where this is going. Good work!
I don´t know…..this story is so damn negative…don´t tkae it hard but I don´t really like it.
yeah, I know. It supose to be negative tough. It’s not meant for everyone to like. Thanks for leaving you opinion I appreciate it a lot.
This story was amazing. It was kind of negative but i loved it anyway. I really hope you continue this cause theres not many shane/jenny fics and this one was so good. I wanna know what happens to shane. Anyways good luck!!!
I’m sorry, don’t take it personal, but I can’t get with the whole Shane wanting to be with Jenny. I just think that Shane and Carmen belong together. . . . .
*I meant tight hugs,not tide… *blushes*
Well I guess I’ll make the difference;I liked it!I don’t know if Shane & Jenny will ever be an item,sleep together or something,but all the other things already exist;the broad smiles,the intense way the look each other,the tide hugs,the way they understand each other by just looking each other.And of course the fact that Shane would always be there for her.She is so relaxed,easy-going & she’s opening up because of Jenny,not Carmen.Carmen just happens to be the girl Shane’s with for now,happens to be around while Shane’s opening up.Carmen is just along for the ride,not driving,Jenny is.TaKe CaRe!