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It brought an undetectable smile to her face as she felt Tina holding onto her like a drowning person.
As Jorge and the other two men ran out to see who was there, the scene, of two woman with their bodies intertwined and passionately kissing each other like it was the end of their life, was what they saw. They all widened their eyes at the steamy action taken place right in front of their eyes.
Jorge had to chuckle at what he saw. He cleared his throat to remind the women that they were in a some kind of public place.
Like they’ve been practicing, the two of them jumped apart hearing the cough as if they were too invested into the kiss to know someone was there.
Bette straightened her posture, untangled herself from Tina’s hair, and blocked the blonde woman from the three men with her body. She looked up to Jorge, looking convincingly embarrassed and guilted. “Uh… boss,” She chuckled, and wiped her lips with on the back of her hand, “I didn’t know— I’m sorry…”
Tina hid behind the taller woman, praying that the man would not ask too many questions that could blow their cover.
“Oh nonsense, Vincent. No wonder Kristen was all thoughtful these days, turns out she’s been missing you.” Jorge dismissed the apology with a wave of his hand, seeming to be very interested in the whole story. “Ahh god damn thought I had a chance here. But since you’ve already got so far ahead of me,”
“I’m really sorry it’s just…”
“Oh I know how it is.” Jorge gave her a knowing smile and a wink. “It’s chemistry. Kristen chose you. Now it’s my bad you need to sneak around but now that I know, we need to do something about it.” He rang up the maid and ordered her to arrange Tina’s personal stuff and move her into Vincent’s room.
“Boss, you really don’t have to—”
“Vincent, don’t be silly. You won an amazing woman over, you treat her right.” He patted her on the back, very content with his arrangement and his own selfless nature. “But tell us, how come you’re better at women than any of us?”
Bette shrugged and joked. “Maybe coz I’m a woman myself.”
They laughed and Jorge turned back to the waiting reps from Iowa. “Gentlemen, shall we?” Then the three of them again disappeared into the study.
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Ahhh god damn it thought it’d be 10 pages as well. Well, might as well break the pattern coz I’d go seriously OCD over it. A little bit longer and more actions this time.
SO to the ladies reading and commenting on my story, pikiangelica, TN1, Pie, simonem, SG, doc, lipitora, bibi, ut, wkm, mscully, cvu, martha, thank you guys for stopping by! I’m trying to measure up. Oh and the silent readers, don’t be shy! Tell me what you think.
There’s literally no other sound in the entire building now. It’s creeping me out, especially after watching the Hannibal series! Off to bed, ladies! Have a good night.
Peace :)
wasn’t expecting them do the deeds this early, but I’m more curious about how you will do the next few scence.
I really liked this chapter with the danger and sensuality. Your writing is superb, RT! Thank you so much for posting!!!
Tina is not the only one that wished for at least one more day!
Let the action begin, but make sure Bette and Tina will get out in one piece.
Don’t care what happens with the others, and i hope Henry will get his punishment.
Thank you for the quick update!
Wow! It was really unexpected. they make love soon. but I understand why you did it.
It’s be as long as, they are in contact with each other for a while, if Tina makes reference to her bosses.
or Bette will be able to escape or she will be jailed, and Tina can’t does anything.
this is certainly a terrible situation.
would not be writing a screw? :P
somehow a way that they are safe to be together?
Oh yes you have me really hooked on this one now! I really want to know where you are taking us with this story, so as they say PPS!
Loved it, thanks
Thoughts of a silent reader… This may be my Tibette story ever. I love the pace and tone that has been set, Both Tina and Bette have exposed strengths and weaknesses in this story. The need each other to survive in multiple ways and worlds. I love that you aren’t rushing the story, but letting it take place at a pace that “just seems right”. The fine details bring the reader into the story fully… the soft touch, the glances, the scents. Well, I think I have expressed too much for a silent reader. Thanks for the posting.
Wow I’m so blown away at your writing skills to even make a comment…sigh you just so brilliant as I always tell you but can’t help it…Anywhooo, damn I feel for Tina, this is a hard choice she will have to make but I’m so hoping that if Bette gets caught it turns out she some kind of spy or FBI. I don’t know just please don’t let her go down…oh and I don’t think they slept together too soon I could totally understand why they did it (get it “did it”lol) I wished it would’ve been sooner but your pace is way more better. This is a entertaining story for sure, I feel like I’m watching a movie and I love movies so bravo to you my friend
Brilliant story. I enjoyed reading it. Can’t wait to see what happens next! Please post soon!!
Loved this chapter.10 stars
This was another amazing chapter.. I love how they have this connection from way back when and that is what’s helping them survive.. I also love the sensuality of the scene, the just barely there love making which was enough to want more but be satisfying on its own..
But now to the trouble please not to much angst my heart couldn’t take it they have to be together and get through this.. And I’m loving Bette as the criminal with a heart!!!
Kudos to you for yet another beautiful story!!!