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“Oh, ok so you’re just worrying about covering you own ass.” Tina tried to look away from the incredibly angry eyes. “Then go worry about something else I won’t put you in this position again.”
So she was right. It did hurt the blonde’s feelings. Bette closed her eyes and sighed. At least she knew that Tina also cared. “How could you still… not get it?” When she reopened her eyes, her vision was somehow compromised, like she was seeing things under water. Then she realized that it was because of her tears. And when she spoke again, her voice was all coarse and shivery, but she resumed. “If you died today… I couldn’t have lived.” She clenched her jaw and leaned a bit forward, touching their foreheads together.
It completely stunned her. Tina shuddered, and lost count of her own heartbeat.
“If I lost you… I couldn’t have lived.” Leaning even closer, Bette gently nudged her with the tip of her nose, and her hands arrived at the woman’s shoulders. She lowered her voice to nearly a whisper, a whisper spoken between lovers. “Do you hear me?”
Her heart rate picked up at the series of small touches. Tina nodded and let herself anticipate what the brunette would do next. And as soon as she felt the soft lips touch hers, she lost all her concerns, her worries, her struggles and drowned herself into the kiss.
Bette put one hand behind the small of her back to keep her close, and freed the other hand to cup her face. She needed this kiss. She needed it to assure herself that Tina was still here with her, and she had not lost her.
Unlike the kiss they shared moments ago, this one was not urgent, not pressured. They explored each other with great tenderness and care. Their lips danced together, making the sensual sounds of the gentle sucking with each movement. Bette became a little impatient. She let out her tongue, licked the corner of Tina’s mouth and persuaded her way in, then she captured the shy partner with that skilled muscle. Their hands were exploring at the same time, trying to find as much skin of one another as possible. “It’s not a game for me, Tina. I want you, and I want to love you, for real.” Bette murmured in between her erratic breaths and kisses.
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Ahhh god damn it thought it’d be 10 pages as well. Well, might as well break the pattern coz I’d go seriously OCD over it. A little bit longer and more actions this time.
SO to the ladies reading and commenting on my story, pikiangelica, TN1, Pie, simonem, SG, doc, lipitora, bibi, ut, wkm, mscully, cvu, martha, thank you guys for stopping by! I’m trying to measure up. Oh and the silent readers, don’t be shy! Tell me what you think.
There’s literally no other sound in the entire building now. It’s creeping me out, especially after watching the Hannibal series! Off to bed, ladies! Have a good night.
Peace :)
wasn’t expecting them do the deeds this early, but I’m more curious about how you will do the next few scence.
I really liked this chapter with the danger and sensuality. Your writing is superb, RT! Thank you so much for posting!!!
Tina is not the only one that wished for at least one more day!
Let the action begin, but make sure Bette and Tina will get out in one piece.
Don’t care what happens with the others, and i hope Henry will get his punishment.
Thank you for the quick update!
Wow! It was really unexpected. they make love soon. but I understand why you did it.
It’s be as long as, they are in contact with each other for a while, if Tina makes reference to her bosses.
or Bette will be able to escape or she will be jailed, and Tina can’t does anything.
this is certainly a terrible situation.
would not be writing a screw? :P
somehow a way that they are safe to be together?
Oh yes you have me really hooked on this one now! I really want to know where you are taking us with this story, so as they say PPS!
Loved it, thanks
Thoughts of a silent reader… This may be my Tibette story ever. I love the pace and tone that has been set, Both Tina and Bette have exposed strengths and weaknesses in this story. The need each other to survive in multiple ways and worlds. I love that you aren’t rushing the story, but letting it take place at a pace that “just seems right”. The fine details bring the reader into the story fully… the soft touch, the glances, the scents. Well, I think I have expressed too much for a silent reader. Thanks for the posting.
Wow I’m so blown away at your writing skills to even make a comment…sigh you just so brilliant as I always tell you but can’t help it…Anywhooo, damn I feel for Tina, this is a hard choice she will have to make but I’m so hoping that if Bette gets caught it turns out she some kind of spy or FBI. I don’t know just please don’t let her go down…oh and I don’t think they slept together too soon I could totally understand why they did it (get it “did it”lol) I wished it would’ve been sooner but your pace is way more better. This is a entertaining story for sure, I feel like I’m watching a movie and I love movies so bravo to you my friend
Brilliant story. I enjoyed reading it. Can’t wait to see what happens next! Please post soon!!
Loved this chapter.10 stars
This was another amazing chapter.. I love how they have this connection from way back when and that is what’s helping them survive.. I also love the sensuality of the scene, the just barely there love making which was enough to want more but be satisfying on its own..
But now to the trouble please not to much angst my heart couldn’t take it they have to be together and get through this.. And I’m loving Bette as the criminal with a heart!!!
Kudos to you for yet another beautiful story!!!