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“It’s not a game.” Tina reassured her. Even if it was inappropriate, even if it was unethical, she fell for the brunette, and she could no longer deny it. With Bette, she felt loved and protected, and the feeling only grew stronger after today’s event. She dragged her nails along the back of Bette’s arms and chuckled to hear the woman hiss. She had every reason to believe that Bette could be dangerous, animalistic even, but right then she just felt her undivided attention. It was such a turn on for her when the brunette bent down a little, and lifted her up against the wall by supporting underneath her thighs as if she weighed no more than the air. She let out a small yelp, hooked her legs around Bette’s hips and wrapped her arms around her neck, kissing her again and again, deeply, passionately.
Bette had not dreamed of this reaction. Actually she had, many times. She dreamed of the innocent peck on the cheek when she was a teenage girl, then she imagined Tina’s face many times when she was with other women. Now it was not her imagination anymore, not a dream, it was real. It put a smile on her face. Even though she was exhausted, she felt another rush of adrenaline in her body that enabled her to carry the woman to her bed. She threw her, rather gently, down into the luxurious covers and climbed on top of her quickly to resume their kiss.
Tina threaded her fingers into the silky brown hair. She could feel her now, actually feel her. Since the first time they met, she wondered how it would be like to touch those thick waves of rich brown. She moaned a little at the pure texture of it.
It drove her absolutely crazy. Bette growled, and landed her lips to feast on Tina’s neck, collarbone, and the exposed skin on the chest. Her hand snuck into unbuckle the stripy bra Tina was wearing, and without the woman’s noticing, she slid the piece out from her shirt.
Tina almost laughed at the impressive little technique. Down to only one layer of clothing, she found herself growing more sensitive, at the brief frictions and the cooler temperature. And her face reddened at this new found excitement.
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Ahhh god damn it thought it’d be 10 pages as well. Well, might as well break the pattern coz I’d go seriously OCD over it. A little bit longer and more actions this time.
SO to the ladies reading and commenting on my story, pikiangelica, TN1, Pie, simonem, SG, doc, lipitora, bibi, ut, wkm, mscully, cvu, martha, thank you guys for stopping by! I’m trying to measure up. Oh and the silent readers, don’t be shy! Tell me what you think.
There’s literally no other sound in the entire building now. It’s creeping me out, especially after watching the Hannibal series! Off to bed, ladies! Have a good night.
Peace :)
wasn’t expecting them do the deeds this early, but I’m more curious about how you will do the next few scence.
I really liked this chapter with the danger and sensuality. Your writing is superb, RT! Thank you so much for posting!!!
Tina is not the only one that wished for at least one more day!
Let the action begin, but make sure Bette and Tina will get out in one piece.
Don’t care what happens with the others, and i hope Henry will get his punishment.
Thank you for the quick update!
Wow! It was really unexpected. they make love soon. but I understand why you did it.
It’s be as long as, they are in contact with each other for a while, if Tina makes reference to her bosses.
or Bette will be able to escape or she will be jailed, and Tina can’t does anything.
this is certainly a terrible situation.
would not be writing a screw? :P
somehow a way that they are safe to be together?
Oh yes you have me really hooked on this one now! I really want to know where you are taking us with this story, so as they say PPS!
Loved it, thanks
Thoughts of a silent reader… This may be my Tibette story ever. I love the pace and tone that has been set, Both Tina and Bette have exposed strengths and weaknesses in this story. The need each other to survive in multiple ways and worlds. I love that you aren’t rushing the story, but letting it take place at a pace that “just seems right”. The fine details bring the reader into the story fully… the soft touch, the glances, the scents. Well, I think I have expressed too much for a silent reader. Thanks for the posting.
Wow I’m so blown away at your writing skills to even make a comment…sigh you just so brilliant as I always tell you but can’t help it…Anywhooo, damn I feel for Tina, this is a hard choice she will have to make but I’m so hoping that if Bette gets caught it turns out she some kind of spy or FBI. I don’t know just please don’t let her go down…oh and I don’t think they slept together too soon I could totally understand why they did it (get it “did it”lol) I wished it would’ve been sooner but your pace is way more better. This is a entertaining story for sure, I feel like I’m watching a movie and I love movies so bravo to you my friend
Brilliant story. I enjoyed reading it. Can’t wait to see what happens next! Please post soon!!
Loved this chapter.10 stars
This was another amazing chapter.. I love how they have this connection from way back when and that is what’s helping them survive.. I also love the sensuality of the scene, the just barely there love making which was enough to want more but be satisfying on its own..
But now to the trouble please not to much angst my heart couldn’t take it they have to be together and get through this.. And I’m loving Bette as the criminal with a heart!!!
Kudos to you for yet another beautiful story!!!