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Do you remember when… Chapter 11
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“Close your eyes and take my hand, please don’t open them until I tell you, just let me guide you” Bette’s words gave Tina an overwhelming feeling of safety, to be guided through an unknown path to an unknown destination, with Bette leading the way, she knew she had nothing to worry about.
“Hey Bette, this is a great view! The finest backside I’ve seen in a while!” Tina giggled.
Bette swung around slightly annoyed that Tina hadn’t kept her eyes shut, “Tina, I asked you to keep your eyes closed, it’s not for very long.”
As Bette turned around she saw that Tina was stood stock still, a little taken aback by Bette’s short tone, but she was standing with her eyes firmly shut, but a small smile creeping back onto her face as she could sense that Bette was looking at her.
“Bette, I was joking, I haven’t opened my eyes, I promise. I’m sorry babe…” Tina’s soft tone pleading with an apology. “Can I open my eyes for a second?”
“Sure, open them!” Bette’s reply came.
Tina opened her eyes, looking straight into Bette deep pools, a mixture of a little hurt and a little amusement.
“I’m sorry Bette, I was joking, honestly, I didn’t open my eyes. Do you forgive me?” Tina was smiling slyly, trying to get around Bette with her charm.
“That depends!” Bette was now teasing, wanting to make Tina squirm a little.
“On what?” Tina said smirking, not sure yet whether Bette was joking or not.
“Explain your comments Kennard?” Bette asked with a smirk.
Tina saw the smugness plastered on Bette’s face, “how can you possibly expect me to keep my eyes off your butt with those Levis on huh? And anyway, that…” she pointed to Bette’s rear, “… is my property now, and if I want to gaze at it for hours, I will…okay! Do you have a problem with that…Porter?” Tina said with mock attitude and a raised eyebrow.
Bette burst out laughing at Tina’s comment and realised that she had certainly met her match in Tina Kennard!
“No problem at all! Come on, and keep those eyes shut, or else!” Bette retorted.
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Hey..Im trying to think of what this chapter conjures up in my mind….apart from the very obvious..its passion…and sensuality…..but at the risk of sounding like a complete mush!….my first thought was magical….it just has that certain something…Sharing a private emotion..or place, has to be considered a special gift…and you`ve more than created that in this chapter….And then theres the Levis!!!!..lol…Really beauitful…Thanks!
WOW… Thanks for sharing your beautiful vision of love. To LOVE cheers!
SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTT longer
God, you write so well!
Jo, you’ve got me reading slowly again. And it is not due to dyslexia.
I love this Jo…just love it!
Jo, where is this place? It sounds so beautiful….is it real? Do they sell tickets? Is there a memorial that says, ‘Tibette was here’? There was such a beautiful melodic flow of nature and emotion.
This as fantastic….zi love this and the third request…U r a very clever writer…there is no need to disable the rating…5 + all the way….
Wow that was amazning and beautiful, love it. Let see whats next, thanks!
That was breathtaking JB! Thanks to you, now every time I see a stained glass window I will be forced to imagine a picture of your “healthy obsession” in my mind. Your writing in exquisite; and this story is divine. More…please!
WOW!!!! The visual imagery was over powering. In my mind I could see the blue color of the sky, the green grass growing throughout the scene, the birds flying and singing to their mates, and the gentle breeze of the lazy afternoon. Then the beautiful visual painting within the churches walls of the two women’s arms wraped around each other as their soft lips join together. Bette’s levis to you is like Tina’s black bra is to me, an obession.
-You have an “interesting” concept of what a “healthy obsession” is, Jo! lol Once again, a beautiful union, filled with love. passion and vulnerability!
You write T&B to perfection, this was such a deep, and very beautiful written chapter, you peel away at the layers and as always your written word for these two characters is truly amazing. Thank you.
Hey Smasher (thanks JT LOL) – I just couldn’t start the day before reading this….and don’t worry mate, it IS a healthy obsession and we definitely share it :o)) I can’t find the right words to describe the feelings I’ve running throught me after reading this!!!!! Thanks mate, you know I love The Jeans :o)) and is The Look next LOL….
Bette, Levis, Temple! makes for a great story in my book. I agree 100% that there is something about Bette Porter in a pair of jeans, I mean the woman can work a business suit but she totally brings life to a pair of boring denims.
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful! Your writing just takes my breath away! Thanks Jo.
i want to believe that this kind of love really exists *sigh* wonderful chapter
Of course my dirty mind was thinking, “OMG they are so going to defile the church.” ;) I think we all have a places or places where we can go and think and find peace. When I was in college there was a stone near the chapel where I often sat and thought. Then at night I could walk off to the right toward the rear of New Main and look out over the small town. The way some of the lights were formed seemed to spell the word “Joy.” But I have yet to find a place that’s totally private. Beautiful chapter, Jo!
I seem to find hope and the utmost joy in this post. Fantastic as always, Jo.
OMG….what a chapter!!!! You’re the best, but don’t let it get to your head LOL……see a talking Christmas dec. :o))
Don’t you EVER get cured for this little obsession of yours for a certain pair of Levi’s!!! It would kill us all! ;)… Jo, once again you had me! Totally and beautifully… But hey, this happens every single time, so… Thanks a million!