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Do you remember when… Chapter 11
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“Actually Bette I feel pretty overwhelmed at all this, its been an emotional week and for you to bring me here and share this special place with me, its amazing, I’m so glad we came here…..”
“I’m glad too…” Bette leaned forward, gently kissing Tina as the closeness between them was palpable.
“So……. don’t keep all that bread to yourself, let me feed these ducks of yours?” Tina tried to make light of her sudden feelings of being emotionally overcome.
Bette smiled as she handed her the bag of bread, she started to break up a piece and throw it to her noisy feathered friends. She suddenly turned to Tina, also feeling emotional at sharing her usual solitary visits, “ya know, I love coming here, its so peaceful and relaxing, it gives me an opportunity to get away from the hustle and bustle of everyday life and the stresses of work – and its close enough to just to be able to jump in the car and come here anytime I want to, which I do often.”
Tina smiled at Bette’s admission that she needed some sanctuary sometimes, a place to escape, to come and unload the thoughts that overwhelm the mind at times, a special place that no-one knew existed in your life.
As the ducks had their fill, Bette and Tina moved along the pathway through the woods, they walked slowly, sometimes hand in hand, sometimes quietly conversing, sometimes in their own thoughts and always with peace between them, as they rounded the lake and came to the grassed area Bette stopped beside a small overgrown pathway, which could so easily have been missed by someone unfamiliar with the trail.
Bette turned Tina to face her, holding both hands in her own, looking deeply into her eyes Bette quietly asked, “Tina, do you trust me?”
Tina cupped Bette’s face with one hand and tenderly brushed her thumb across the arch of Bette’s cheekbone, never breaking the deep intense eye contact, “Without a doubt…”
Bette turned her head slightly, closed her eyes and slowly kissed the palm of Tina’s hand, Tina could feel the warm breath delicately caressing the creases of her hand, the touch of Bette’s lips against the sensitive palm sending shivers down Tina’s spine, a tingle that she knew to be a frequent reaction of being with a woman like Bette Porter.
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Hey..Im trying to think of what this chapter conjures up in my mind….apart from the very obvious..its passion…and sensuality…..but at the risk of sounding like a complete mush!….my first thought was magical….it just has that certain something…Sharing a private emotion..or place, has to be considered a special gift…and you`ve more than created that in this chapter….And then theres the Levis!!!!..lol…Really beauitful…Thanks!
WOW… Thanks for sharing your beautiful vision of love. To LOVE cheers!
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God, you write so well!
Jo, you’ve got me reading slowly again. And it is not due to dyslexia.
I love this Jo…just love it!
Jo, where is this place? It sounds so beautiful….is it real? Do they sell tickets? Is there a memorial that says, ‘Tibette was here’? There was such a beautiful melodic flow of nature and emotion.
This as fantastic….zi love this and the third request…U r a very clever writer…there is no need to disable the rating…5 + all the way….
Wow that was amazning and beautiful, love it. Let see whats next, thanks!
That was breathtaking JB! Thanks to you, now every time I see a stained glass window I will be forced to imagine a picture of your “healthy obsession” in my mind. Your writing in exquisite; and this story is divine. More…please!
WOW!!!! The visual imagery was over powering. In my mind I could see the blue color of the sky, the green grass growing throughout the scene, the birds flying and singing to their mates, and the gentle breeze of the lazy afternoon. Then the beautiful visual painting within the churches walls of the two women’s arms wraped around each other as their soft lips join together. Bette’s levis to you is like Tina’s black bra is to me, an obession.
-You have an “interesting” concept of what a “healthy obsession” is, Jo! lol Once again, a beautiful union, filled with love. passion and vulnerability!
You write T&B to perfection, this was such a deep, and very beautiful written chapter, you peel away at the layers and as always your written word for these two characters is truly amazing. Thank you.
Hey Smasher (thanks JT LOL) – I just couldn’t start the day before reading this….and don’t worry mate, it IS a healthy obsession and we definitely share it :o)) I can’t find the right words to describe the feelings I’ve running throught me after reading this!!!!! Thanks mate, you know I love The Jeans :o)) and is The Look next LOL….
Bette, Levis, Temple! makes for a great story in my book. I agree 100% that there is something about Bette Porter in a pair of jeans, I mean the woman can work a business suit but she totally brings life to a pair of boring denims.
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful! Your writing just takes my breath away! Thanks Jo.
i want to believe that this kind of love really exists *sigh* wonderful chapter
Of course my dirty mind was thinking, “OMG they are so going to defile the church.” ;) I think we all have a places or places where we can go and think and find peace. When I was in college there was a stone near the chapel where I often sat and thought. Then at night I could walk off to the right toward the rear of New Main and look out over the small town. The way some of the lights were formed seemed to spell the word “Joy.” But I have yet to find a place that’s totally private. Beautiful chapter, Jo!
I seem to find hope and the utmost joy in this post. Fantastic as always, Jo.
OMG….what a chapter!!!! You’re the best, but don’t let it get to your head LOL……see a talking Christmas dec. :o))
Don’t you EVER get cured for this little obsession of yours for a certain pair of Levi’s!!! It would kill us all! ;)… Jo, once again you had me! Totally and beautifully… But hey, this happens every single time, so… Thanks a million!