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Do you remember when… Chapter 11
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Bette returned the smile knowing full well that if Tina thought this small wooded area was beautiful then she would be bowled over when she saw the view that they would be seeing in a few minutes.
As they rounded the corner on the path of the wooded area Tina was looking around her and looking for the birds in which she could hear.
Bette smirked, watching as Tina just held her hand, happy to be guided along the pathway as her eyes took in the scenery, her face turned skyward, her feet stumbling over the uneven ground on more than one occasion.
As the impending scenery came into Bette’s view she slowed her pace, Tina only noticing that Bette had almost come to a halt when she bumped into the stationary figure of Bette.
“Oh shit, sorry Bette, I wasn’t paying attention to where…,” Tina’s words trailed off as her head turned and her eyes scanned the site before her.
“Oh my god Bette, look at this…..” Tina’s look of wonderment and awe was all Bette needed to know that she was glad she brought Tina to this special place. But Bette knew that there was still more in store, but she would save that for a little later, her ‘Temple’ would be the pinnacle of today and she hoped that it would give Tina the same level of awe that it did Bette. Bette knew that this initial reaction from Tina was just for starters.
The view in front of them was one of a small lake surrounded on one side by an area of trees, the sunlight behind them making silhouette patterns along the waters edge, the other side of the lake was flanked by a grassed area. The calm water interspersed with the wild ducks and swans swimming sedately along the rippling waters edge.
As they silently approached the lake edge the ducks came swimming up to them giving their varying vocals of a quack here and there, their family of ducklings hurriedly following behind.
“So these are your ducks”, Tina was full of awe and was very mute as she gazed at her surroundings.
“Yes, this is them, are you OK Tina, you’re a little quiet?” Bette enquired worriedly.
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Hey..Im trying to think of what this chapter conjures up in my mind….apart from the very obvious..its passion…and sensuality…..but at the risk of sounding like a complete mush!….my first thought was magical….it just has that certain something…Sharing a private emotion..or place, has to be considered a special gift…and you`ve more than created that in this chapter….And then theres the Levis!!!!..lol…Really beauitful…Thanks!
WOW… Thanks for sharing your beautiful vision of love. To LOVE cheers!
SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTT longer
God, you write so well!
Jo, you’ve got me reading slowly again. And it is not due to dyslexia.
I love this Jo…just love it!
Jo, where is this place? It sounds so beautiful….is it real? Do they sell tickets? Is there a memorial that says, ‘Tibette was here’? There was such a beautiful melodic flow of nature and emotion.
This as fantastic….zi love this and the third request…U r a very clever writer…there is no need to disable the rating…5 + all the way….
Wow that was amazning and beautiful, love it. Let see whats next, thanks!
That was breathtaking JB! Thanks to you, now every time I see a stained glass window I will be forced to imagine a picture of your “healthy obsession” in my mind. Your writing in exquisite; and this story is divine. More…please!
WOW!!!! The visual imagery was over powering. In my mind I could see the blue color of the sky, the green grass growing throughout the scene, the birds flying and singing to their mates, and the gentle breeze of the lazy afternoon. Then the beautiful visual painting within the churches walls of the two women’s arms wraped around each other as their soft lips join together. Bette’s levis to you is like Tina’s black bra is to me, an obession.
-You have an “interesting” concept of what a “healthy obsession” is, Jo! lol Once again, a beautiful union, filled with love. passion and vulnerability!
You write T&B to perfection, this was such a deep, and very beautiful written chapter, you peel away at the layers and as always your written word for these two characters is truly amazing. Thank you.
Hey Smasher (thanks JT LOL) – I just couldn’t start the day before reading this….and don’t worry mate, it IS a healthy obsession and we definitely share it :o)) I can’t find the right words to describe the feelings I’ve running throught me after reading this!!!!! Thanks mate, you know I love The Jeans :o)) and is The Look next LOL….
Bette, Levis, Temple! makes for a great story in my book. I agree 100% that there is something about Bette Porter in a pair of jeans, I mean the woman can work a business suit but she totally brings life to a pair of boring denims.
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful! Your writing just takes my breath away! Thanks Jo.
i want to believe that this kind of love really exists *sigh* wonderful chapter
Of course my dirty mind was thinking, “OMG they are so going to defile the church.” ;) I think we all have a places or places where we can go and think and find peace. When I was in college there was a stone near the chapel where I often sat and thought. Then at night I could walk off to the right toward the rear of New Main and look out over the small town. The way some of the lights were formed seemed to spell the word “Joy.” But I have yet to find a place that’s totally private. Beautiful chapter, Jo!
I seem to find hope and the utmost joy in this post. Fantastic as always, Jo.
OMG….what a chapter!!!! You’re the best, but don’t let it get to your head LOL……see a talking Christmas dec. :o))
Don’t you EVER get cured for this little obsession of yours for a certain pair of Levi’s!!! It would kill us all! ;)… Jo, once again you had me! Totally and beautifully… But hey, this happens every single time, so… Thanks a million!