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Do you remember when… Chapter 11
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“Haven’t you ever had any long term relationships Bette?” Tina was somewhat curious to know about how this train of thought had suddenly ‘derailed her’ as Bette put it. “Surely you have spent time with people who you share things with at some time!”
“I’ve had a few short flings, but never any that had any substance really, I always got bored, I didn’t feel challenged or interested for long enough and they’ve just fizzle out after a short while, and that has always been my doing, I couldn’t be bothered with the upkeep and maintenance that the relationship needed. Completely and utterly selfish I know and really not fair on that other person. I don’t know…, I always felt women just wanted to be with me because I owned an art gallery or was in a position of authority, or looked good on someone’s arm, or dare I say it, ‘the Lesbian Jedi wanted them…’. For me that was way too shallow, but sometimes it suited me, I wanted and needed a good looking woman to go to functions with me and there was never any trouble finding one, but that’s all they were for, to look good on my arm. So that makes me as shallow as them.” She sighed, knowing how to all sounded when said aloud instead of going through her mind, as it had done on a consistent basis, but lately it all contradicted itself… ever since she met Tina.
Tina looked at Bette as her face contorted with so many emotions. Her own thoughts running a rampage as she second guessed, wondering if Bette was finding their relationship too deep, too quickly, “Bette…?”
“Yeah…”
“Are you having second thoughts about us?” Tina said quietly, her heart missing a beat as she said the words.
“What…?” Bette sat up, not knowing what to make of Tina’s assumption. “What makes you say that T?” Bette asked, completely surprise at the words and the petrified look on Tina’s face.
Tina’s eyes became downcast, her heart beginning to pound, wondering whether Bette had brought her here to end their relationship, their shared words, their shared looks, hadn’t they only told one another they loved each other minutes ago. She felt her eyes well, not even wanting to contemplating the words that Bette was about to say.
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Hey..Im trying to think of what this chapter conjures up in my mind….apart from the very obvious..its passion…and sensuality…..but at the risk of sounding like a complete mush!….my first thought was magical….it just has that certain something…Sharing a private emotion..or place, has to be considered a special gift…and you`ve more than created that in this chapter….And then theres the Levis!!!!..lol…Really beauitful…Thanks!
WOW… Thanks for sharing your beautiful vision of love. To LOVE cheers!
SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTT longer
God, you write so well!
Jo, you’ve got me reading slowly again. And it is not due to dyslexia.
I love this Jo…just love it!
Jo, where is this place? It sounds so beautiful….is it real? Do they sell tickets? Is there a memorial that says, ‘Tibette was here’? There was such a beautiful melodic flow of nature and emotion.
This as fantastic….zi love this and the third request…U r a very clever writer…there is no need to disable the rating…5 + all the way….
Wow that was amazning and beautiful, love it. Let see whats next, thanks!
That was breathtaking JB! Thanks to you, now every time I see a stained glass window I will be forced to imagine a picture of your “healthy obsession” in my mind. Your writing in exquisite; and this story is divine. More…please!
WOW!!!! The visual imagery was over powering. In my mind I could see the blue color of the sky, the green grass growing throughout the scene, the birds flying and singing to their mates, and the gentle breeze of the lazy afternoon. Then the beautiful visual painting within the churches walls of the two women’s arms wraped around each other as their soft lips join together. Bette’s levis to you is like Tina’s black bra is to me, an obession.
-You have an “interesting” concept of what a “healthy obsession” is, Jo! lol Once again, a beautiful union, filled with love. passion and vulnerability!
You write T&B to perfection, this was such a deep, and very beautiful written chapter, you peel away at the layers and as always your written word for these two characters is truly amazing. Thank you.
Hey Smasher (thanks JT LOL) – I just couldn’t start the day before reading this….and don’t worry mate, it IS a healthy obsession and we definitely share it :o)) I can’t find the right words to describe the feelings I’ve running throught me after reading this!!!!! Thanks mate, you know I love The Jeans :o)) and is The Look next LOL….
Bette, Levis, Temple! makes for a great story in my book. I agree 100% that there is something about Bette Porter in a pair of jeans, I mean the woman can work a business suit but she totally brings life to a pair of boring denims.
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful! Your writing just takes my breath away! Thanks Jo.
i want to believe that this kind of love really exists *sigh* wonderful chapter
Of course my dirty mind was thinking, “OMG they are so going to defile the church.” ;) I think we all have a places or places where we can go and think and find peace. When I was in college there was a stone near the chapel where I often sat and thought. Then at night I could walk off to the right toward the rear of New Main and look out over the small town. The way some of the lights were formed seemed to spell the word “Joy.” But I have yet to find a place that’s totally private. Beautiful chapter, Jo!
I seem to find hope and the utmost joy in this post. Fantastic as always, Jo.
OMG….what a chapter!!!! You’re the best, but don’t let it get to your head LOL……see a talking Christmas dec. :o))
Don’t you EVER get cured for this little obsession of yours for a certain pair of Levi’s!!! It would kill us all! ;)… Jo, once again you had me! Totally and beautifully… But hey, this happens every single time, so… Thanks a million!