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Do you remember when… Chapter 11
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Bette drove the length of the road and suddenly turned right into a small parking area, halted the car and turned the engine off.
“Well, we finally got here T, just a little walk from here, are you ready to go?” Bette asked, she was feeling nervous at allowing Tina this close to her sanctity but she was also excited at the prospect of sharing it with her also, at the present moment Bette couldn’t figure out which emotion was winning the battle.
As Bette got out of the car she reached behind the seat and picked out a plastic bag, Tina hadn’t noticed Bette put this into the car earlier and was curious to know the contents.
“What do you have there?” Tina’s curiosity did get the better of her.
“Oh it’s just some bread for the ducks,” Bette replied with a small smile.
“The ducks?” Tina chuckled.
“You’ll see!” Bette smiled back giving Tina the full killer melt. “Come on let’s go,” Bette held out her hand for Tina to take, she locked the car and then they were off.
The walked hand in hand for a short while through a wooded area, it had a small stream running alongside the pathway and there were birds singing in the trees.
Tina looked at Bette, not sure whether she should share how mushy she was feeling, almost embarrassed at how she was feeling, she decided to bite the bullet and share, knowing that if Bette hadn’t had the same feeling then she wouldn’t be sharing this place with her.
They had shared their love of the ocean, the hours they had spent together walking hand in hand along the shoreline, sitting in the beach in each others arms, watching as the sun made its descent for another day. They both enjoyed the calmness and peace that nature brought them, and today was no different; today Bette was sharing something special with her.
“Bette this is such a peaceful place, no wonder you like coming here, it’s beautiful, I just love listening to the birds singing, it makes me feel close to nature.” Tina looked up at Bette’s face and smiled.
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Hey..Im trying to think of what this chapter conjures up in my mind….apart from the very obvious..its passion…and sensuality…..but at the risk of sounding like a complete mush!….my first thought was magical….it just has that certain something…Sharing a private emotion..or place, has to be considered a special gift…and you`ve more than created that in this chapter….And then theres the Levis!!!!..lol…Really beauitful…Thanks!
WOW… Thanks for sharing your beautiful vision of love. To LOVE cheers!
SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTT longer
God, you write so well!
Jo, you’ve got me reading slowly again. And it is not due to dyslexia.
I love this Jo…just love it!
Jo, where is this place? It sounds so beautiful….is it real? Do they sell tickets? Is there a memorial that says, ‘Tibette was here’? There was such a beautiful melodic flow of nature and emotion.
This as fantastic….zi love this and the third request…U r a very clever writer…there is no need to disable the rating…5 + all the way….
Wow that was amazning and beautiful, love it. Let see whats next, thanks!
That was breathtaking JB! Thanks to you, now every time I see a stained glass window I will be forced to imagine a picture of your “healthy obsession” in my mind. Your writing in exquisite; and this story is divine. More…please!
WOW!!!! The visual imagery was over powering. In my mind I could see the blue color of the sky, the green grass growing throughout the scene, the birds flying and singing to their mates, and the gentle breeze of the lazy afternoon. Then the beautiful visual painting within the churches walls of the two women’s arms wraped around each other as their soft lips join together. Bette’s levis to you is like Tina’s black bra is to me, an obession.
-You have an “interesting” concept of what a “healthy obsession” is, Jo! lol Once again, a beautiful union, filled with love. passion and vulnerability!
You write T&B to perfection, this was such a deep, and very beautiful written chapter, you peel away at the layers and as always your written word for these two characters is truly amazing. Thank you.
Hey Smasher (thanks JT LOL) – I just couldn’t start the day before reading this….and don’t worry mate, it IS a healthy obsession and we definitely share it :o)) I can’t find the right words to describe the feelings I’ve running throught me after reading this!!!!! Thanks mate, you know I love The Jeans :o)) and is The Look next LOL….
Bette, Levis, Temple! makes for a great story in my book. I agree 100% that there is something about Bette Porter in a pair of jeans, I mean the woman can work a business suit but she totally brings life to a pair of boring denims.
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful! Your writing just takes my breath away! Thanks Jo.
i want to believe that this kind of love really exists *sigh* wonderful chapter
Of course my dirty mind was thinking, “OMG they are so going to defile the church.” ;) I think we all have a places or places where we can go and think and find peace. When I was in college there was a stone near the chapel where I often sat and thought. Then at night I could walk off to the right toward the rear of New Main and look out over the small town. The way some of the lights were formed seemed to spell the word “Joy.” But I have yet to find a place that’s totally private. Beautiful chapter, Jo!
I seem to find hope and the utmost joy in this post. Fantastic as always, Jo.
OMG….what a chapter!!!! You’re the best, but don’t let it get to your head LOL……see a talking Christmas dec. :o))
Don’t you EVER get cured for this little obsession of yours for a certain pair of Levi’s!!! It would kill us all! ;)… Jo, once again you had me! Totally and beautifully… But hey, this happens every single time, so… Thanks a million!