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Do you remember when… Chapter 11
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“Why the smile’s?” Tina asked as she had noticed that Bette had continued to smile while she was driving.
“I was just thinking that you are very perceptive T…, and… that I love you…” Bette replied.
“I love you too sweetheart…” Tina reached across, stroking Bette’s cheek, their eyes met, mutual understanding of the delicate words they shared, “…and in what way am I perceptive, just by noticing that you look more relaxed?” Tina smiled.
“Yes, but you’ve managed to do that quite a bit over the last three months, more than anyone I have ever known, you seem to be able to know exactly what I’m thinking and feeling just by looking at me!” Bette looked over, smiling, as she continued driving, “so are you holding out on me…, do you have a Psychology degree hidden in your CV and can read behaviours and emotions professionally or are you genuinely reading me that well?”
“You sound surprised to know that people can read you?”
“That’s because no one else does… I usually manage to cover my tracks of emotions so well that even if I was an emotional train wreck there wouldn’t be very many people who would be able to tell!”
Tina laughed, “well… I don’t have a Psychology degree, I wish I did, I suppose it comes down to the connection between us, I can’t explain it…, I just feel like when I look at you that I can see inside and I can feel how you are feeling, I look into your eyes and they seem to tell me so much…, just a woman’s intuition I guess!” Tina chuckled again at her paraphrasing of a woman’s intuition.
“I like your intuition… can you tell what I’m thinking right this minute…” Bette said with a sparkle in her eye.
Tina looked at the tell tales eyes, her mind retrieving the dirty thoughts being sent to her, she smirked as she replied, “you are so bad…”
“But you love me… right?” Bette said with raised eyebrows, already knowing the answer.
Tina looked over, seeing the twinkling ebony eyes, “absolutely…”
Bette had started to slow the car, indicating to turn left onto what seemed a long endless road with trees lined like soldiers for as far as you could see. Tina was getting more curious by the minute now and was getting excited about where Bette was taking her.
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Hey..Im trying to think of what this chapter conjures up in my mind….apart from the very obvious..its passion…and sensuality…..but at the risk of sounding like a complete mush!….my first thought was magical….it just has that certain something…Sharing a private emotion..or place, has to be considered a special gift…and you`ve more than created that in this chapter….And then theres the Levis!!!!..lol…Really beauitful…Thanks!
WOW… Thanks for sharing your beautiful vision of love. To LOVE cheers!
SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTT longer
God, you write so well!
Jo, you’ve got me reading slowly again. And it is not due to dyslexia.
I love this Jo…just love it!
Jo, where is this place? It sounds so beautiful….is it real? Do they sell tickets? Is there a memorial that says, ‘Tibette was here’? There was such a beautiful melodic flow of nature and emotion.
This as fantastic….zi love this and the third request…U r a very clever writer…there is no need to disable the rating…5 + all the way….
Wow that was amazning and beautiful, love it. Let see whats next, thanks!
That was breathtaking JB! Thanks to you, now every time I see a stained glass window I will be forced to imagine a picture of your “healthy obsession” in my mind. Your writing in exquisite; and this story is divine. More…please!
WOW!!!! The visual imagery was over powering. In my mind I could see the blue color of the sky, the green grass growing throughout the scene, the birds flying and singing to their mates, and the gentle breeze of the lazy afternoon. Then the beautiful visual painting within the churches walls of the two women’s arms wraped around each other as their soft lips join together. Bette’s levis to you is like Tina’s black bra is to me, an obession.
-You have an “interesting” concept of what a “healthy obsession” is, Jo! lol Once again, a beautiful union, filled with love. passion and vulnerability!
You write T&B to perfection, this was such a deep, and very beautiful written chapter, you peel away at the layers and as always your written word for these two characters is truly amazing. Thank you.
Hey Smasher (thanks JT LOL) – I just couldn’t start the day before reading this….and don’t worry mate, it IS a healthy obsession and we definitely share it :o)) I can’t find the right words to describe the feelings I’ve running throught me after reading this!!!!! Thanks mate, you know I love The Jeans :o)) and is The Look next LOL….
Bette, Levis, Temple! makes for a great story in my book. I agree 100% that there is something about Bette Porter in a pair of jeans, I mean the woman can work a business suit but she totally brings life to a pair of boring denims.
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful! Your writing just takes my breath away! Thanks Jo.
i want to believe that this kind of love really exists *sigh* wonderful chapter
Of course my dirty mind was thinking, “OMG they are so going to defile the church.” ;) I think we all have a places or places where we can go and think and find peace. When I was in college there was a stone near the chapel where I often sat and thought. Then at night I could walk off to the right toward the rear of New Main and look out over the small town. The way some of the lights were formed seemed to spell the word “Joy.” But I have yet to find a place that’s totally private. Beautiful chapter, Jo!
I seem to find hope and the utmost joy in this post. Fantastic as always, Jo.
OMG….what a chapter!!!! You’re the best, but don’t let it get to your head LOL……see a talking Christmas dec. :o))
Don’t you EVER get cured for this little obsession of yours for a certain pair of Levi’s!!! It would kill us all! ;)… Jo, once again you had me! Totally and beautifully… But hey, this happens every single time, so… Thanks a million!