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    Double Vision 4

    Story written on August 21, 2006 by vvitch.
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    Number of Comments: 23
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=62155
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    Who’s next?

    Previously…

     

    Estelle maintained her dignity and spoke again “because I wanted to see… uhh… Angeline”

     

    “Angelica”

     

    “That’s what I said” Estelle raised her chin haughtily.

     

    Both Helena and Bette were too caught up in their snickering and Estelle too caught up in her huffing that none of them heard the voice until it was just outside the door.

     

    “Hey Helena! You in there?” Enter female. “…WHOA!”

     

    Caught again? In the same bloody place??!

     

    Chapter 4

     

    “Alice”

     

    Estelle gulped. Everyone in the said bloody place stood stock still.

     

    Bette waited for her cue. It was drugged-up Alice after all- you couldn’t tell if she’d just exclaimed at having seen two Helena’s or if she’d just spotted an unusually nice butterfly on the wall.

     

    “Ok why are you two talking to the toilet? Who’s in there?”

     

    See? Bette thought smugly. She could almost feel Helena sag with relief. She noticed with amusement that Helena had not moved an inch, even though she was obviously not in Alice’s view. “Very funny, Alice. There’s no one here. Helena and I were just having a little talk. Right, Helena?” she looked at Estelle.

     

    Estelle sighed with relief as she nodded. She didn’t want Alice to find out she’d been lied to. They’d become good friends and Estelle wanted Helena to have that.  

     

    “Uh huh. Right.” Alice’s attention had already shifted. She jerked her chin towards the door “C’mon Helena, we’re already late. Let’s go, let’s go!”

     

    “Go? Go where?”

     

    Alice scowled “To yoga, silly. Didn’t you say like an hour ago that you’d take me to yoga today?! Oh great! Let’s just forget about ol’ Alice and that she’s going through this really t…”

     

    “But…”  Estelle struggled to understand just how she was ending up taking Alice to bloody yoga. Then she heard a loud snort from the toilet stall where her twin was hiding. Helena!

     

    Helena clapped a hand over her nose hoping that drowned out her disgusting snort. God I hope Bette didn’t hear me snort! Funny- she was more concerned about Bette hearing it than the still-clueless Alice. She tried to keep her mirth down. Estelle! Going to yoga! That would be a sight!!! She hadn’t intended it of course; she’d planned on taking Alice to yoga herself. But… Helena glanced at Bette who was pretending to listen intently to Alice’s rant  …with Estelle out of the way, I could sneak in a few minutes with Bette.

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    1. 10 stars!!! This is awesome! It was well written, light-hearted…I was smiling the whole way through! And the emding…Nailbiting…I’m dying to know who’s on to Helena!!! It has to be someone new…so it’s not Bette or Alice…so it has to be either Shane, Dana, Dylan or Kit!!! I think it’s Shane though the way it’s said sounds like Kit! So I think it’s Kit then…Am I right, am I right, am I right, am I right? Tell me nowwwwwww……….I hate waiting…*pouts*…thanks!

    5. Oh no not again !!! Who is it this time? I guess Carmen who came home early ..vvitchy this is really good and you should post sooner babes. Keep up the good job thx

    6. Hey, I read the comments!! So give it all away if you’d like. ROFLOL “…It was drugged-up Alice after all- you couldn’t tell if she’d just exclaimed at having seen two Helena’s or if she’d just spotted an unusually nice butterfly on the wall!” LOL… Classic . Good flashback: I just watched the yoga scene again from ep 3.1, it was hilarious! I love the B&E banter…I don’t know maybe I just need to laugh. My guess…Shane?

    7. Thanks for posting again. This story is hilarious and original. Don’t reveal them to be twins just yet. Keep the suspense going. I think Shane has busted Helena this time and she can keep a secret

    8. Everyone keeps saying Shane, but I dont recall Shane leaving the house AFTER she entered it. Remember, Bette and Tinahave news they want to share, and since it hasnt been shared yet, it stands to reason that Shane is still in the house.

    10. awwwwww s***, the plot thickens…this story is so good…you write estelle and helena so well….i love this story…PLEASE post soon, don’t keep us hangin’, it just ain’t right (Big Smile). thanks for the post!

    11. lol…they just need to make an announcement because people are seeing them one by one…what was the announcement? Is this story gonna be a Bette & Helena…and a Tina & Estelle? Please post soon.

    14. I looove your cliffhangers, but I’d say it’s Shane. That person sounds too cool and absolutely not surprised to be anyone else imo. Anyway, Bette & Estelle interactions really just crack me up. Thi is so much fun. Plea

    18. Helena is as impatient as me, i’d walk into my own surprise party shouting surprise! lolcan’t wait to find out whose caught her this time post soon

    19. I read all the chapters and I can’t stop laughing, I like the way you’re writing this story!!! My guess is SHANE, I think she went outside to smoke and caught Helena…

    20. This is hilarious. Obviously, Helena lacks the skills to pull this off. Estelle on the other hand seems to be doing just fine. Cant wait to know who has busted Helena….AGAIN?!?

    23. Fantastic!! i love love love this! you write so damn well, really hilarious woman! couldn’t stop laughing all the way through! I need more please!!

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