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Double Vision 4
Aw…you’re not happy? Before she could stop herself Helena reached out and laid a hand on Bette’s arm… but quickly dropped it. They’d only just met after all, Bette might not like it. And she’s with Tina. Instead, she smiled “Me too. I hope we can be friends Bette” and she meant it too. If friendship was all Bette could offer right now, she’d take it.
“I’d like that” grinned Bette. It had not escaped her that she and Helena seemed to be perfectly in tune with each other, at least when it came to annoying Estelle. She could sense good times to come, and Helena was obviously new here and had few friends who really knew her.
Helena chuckled as she too thought of how Estelle might be faring in yoga. God, she must be cursing me with every deep-breath-in, hold, let-out-slowly!
“I should get going actually. Tina’s waiting for me by the car and we have a lot to do for the party tomorrow. Will I see you there, or is your sister going to go?”
“If she doesn’t kill me first for making her do yoga!” laughed Helena. “We’ll figure something out, but rest assured you’ll be seeing at least one of us” She nodded “You better get going”
“Right! Ok, I’ll see you later Helena. Nice to finally meet the real you”
“And you, Bette” replied Helena charmingly. She watched as Bette flashed another brilliant smile and walked out the door. Yey I have a friend! And it’s Bette! thought Helena as she did a little happy dance. The other girls were incredible too, but they didn’t know who Helena really was. And that was something Helena had fought even when growing up. Having an identical twin and a rich mother tended to blur the identity line for Helena- she had never been sure if people liked her for who she was. Helena shook her head to clear her thoughts. Enough reminiscing. The events of the afternoon had reminded her how much she loved having her sister close by. Now I just have to figure out a way to keep Estelle from leaving.
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(Next day, few blocks away from Bette and Tina’s place)
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10 stars!!! This is awesome! It was well written, light-hearted…I was smiling the whole way through! And the emding…Nailbiting…I’m dying to know who’s on to Helena!!! It has to be someone new…so it’s not Bette or Alice…so it has to be either Shane, Dana, Dylan or Kit!!! I think it’s Shane though the way it’s said sounds like Kit! So I think it’s Kit then…Am I right, am I right, am I right, am I right? Tell me nowwwwwww……….I hate waiting…*pouts*…thanks!
dang busted again. This time i have NO clue of who it could be
yay!!! another update! i wonder who it is?!?! i hope u update again sooooon!!!!! =)
Cliffhangers! I think it’s…hmmm…was Jenny back at this point? Shoot–I suck at guessing! Please post soon!
Oh no not again !!! Who is it this time? I guess Carmen who came home early ..vvitchy this is really good and you should post sooner babes. Keep up the good job thx
Hey, I read the comments!! So give it all away if you’d like. ROFLOL “…It was drugged-up Alice after all- you couldn’t tell if she’d just exclaimed at having seen two Helena’s or if she’d just spotted an unusually nice butterfly on the wall!” LOL… Classic ïŠ. Good flashback: I just watched the yoga scene again from ep 3.1, it was hilarious! I love the B&E banter…I don’t know maybe I just need to laugh. My guess…Shane?
Thanks for posting again. This story is hilarious and original. Don’t reveal them to be twins just yet. Keep the suspense going. I think Shane has busted Helena this time and she can keep a secret
Everyone keeps saying Shane, but I dont recall Shane leaving the house AFTER she entered it. Remember, Bette and Tinahave news they want to share, and since it hasnt been shared yet, it stands to reason that Shane is still in the house.
This is so funny and this time who is bust Helena. Ok post soon please, thanks!
awwwwww s***, the plot thickens…this story is so good…you write estelle and helena so well….i love this story…PLEASE post soon, don’t keep us hangin’, it just ain’t right (Big Smile). thanks for the post!
lol…they just need to make an announcement because people are seeing them one by one…what was the announcement? Is this story gonna be a Bette & Helena…and a Tina & Estelle? Please post soon.
Great, hilarious and amusing….and again a cliffhanger, gosh who is it now, don’t have a clue.
Great chapter! I love the way this is going! I can’t wait for more! So Shane is the one right?
I looove your cliffhangers, but I’d say it’s Shane. That person sounds too cool and absolutely not surprised to be anyone else imo. Anyway, Bette & Estelle interactions really just crack me up. Thi is so much fun. Plea
Ok, what I meant to write before being interrupted was ” please keep posting…And the sooner, the better of course !”
Ha! Well done with the ending. Can’t wait to see who caught her this time! Great chapter.
oh…my….AGAIN….i think it won’t take over 1 week….everyone will know the truth…..hahahaha…………….
Helena is as impatient as me, i’d walk into my own surprise party shouting surprise! lolcan’t wait to find out whose caught her this time post soon
I read all the chapters and I can’t stop laughing, I like the way you’re writing this story!!! My guess is SHANE, I think she went outside to smoke and caught Helena…
This is hilarious. Obviously, Helena lacks the skills to pull this off. Estelle on the other hand seems to be doing just fine. Cant wait to know who has busted Helena….AGAIN?!?
Aaaargh, so much for suspense! can’t wait to know what’s coming next, your story is great! please post soon
Argggg…. so frustrating. Yeah, these twins need to get it out in the open. they can’t go on like this!
Fantastic!! i love love love this! you write so damn well, really hilarious woman! couldn’t stop laughing all the way through! I need more please!!