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    Double Vision 4

    Story written on August 21, 2006 by vvitch.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=62155
    Author Notes:

    Who’s next?

     

    “Would you rather I didn’t help you? I’m sure Alice would be devastated to know her oldest friend forgot her birthday”

     

    Bette gave in “Fine fine, let’s hear your idea” She waited until Estelle finished telling her before she spoke again, muttering under her breath “Don’t think I didn’t notice your emphasis on the word ‘oldest’ just now”

     

    Estelle smirked “I was hoping you would”

     

    “Where’s Helena? You may leave now” Bette responded imperiously, bending down to insert Alice’s name on the cake.

     

    “She’s in the car. I prefer to stay, actually. Wouldn’t want to miss seeing you make a mess of that”

     

    Before Bette could retort, they both heard another voice from behind. “Hey…”

     

    “Hey Shane” Bette greeted the lanky girl who looked a bit worse for wear “Didn’t think you could make it”

     

    “Yeah. Carmen went on to the thing with her family. I stayed back, didn’t want to miss this big news you got”

     

    “News?” Estelle quirked an eyebrow.

     

    Bette sighed, busying herself with the cake again “Yes. Tina and I have some news to share with our friends”

     

    “Which includes you too, Helena” Shane finished it for Bette, knowing that Bette would probably exclude her if she had any say in it. With good reason too but…Shane had always thought Bette and Helena were missing out on something by being at each others’ throat all the time. They had so much in common, it was a sin they weren’t friends.

     

    “Sure, I’ll wait around for that” Estelle smiled smugly after Bette gave a reluctant nod. “Thanks Shane”

     

    “Sure” Shane replied, a bit puzzled. They’re fighting again? Didn’t Helena seem nicer yesterday at the Planet? I could’ve sworn she was making eyes at Bette, all that staring… Not that she’d mind of course, Shane had already guessed what Bette and Tina’s news were going to be.

     

    ~~~

     

    (An hour later, still outside Bette and Tina’s)

     

    Helena looked around stealthily from her hiding spot. She’d just spent the last half hour ringing her sister to make the switch but surprise surprise- her blasted sister was not picking up. So, she’d done the only thing any hot-blooded, furious, impatient-beyond-reason woman with a crush would do. She hid in the bushes. Well, she had been hiding there for a while now and her leg was cramping from crouching down and her neck was aching from peering so often. She’d just seen the last of the kids leave with their parents, leaving only the gang inside the house.

     

    She now snuck around the side, and entered the yard of the house next door. It was a grungy house with a shed, and Helena wondered fleetingly who lived there. But she brushed this thought aside before it registered; more intent on the task of looking over the fence into Bette’s pool. She peered and saw that the bay windows leading to the pool were open, leaving her with a view of the girls seated around the living room. Helena squinted, trying to make out which of the girls were there. She saw Estelle, Bette…

     

    “Interesting” came a voice from right behind her. “I see you in there, and yet I see you right here too. Now how can that be, Helena?”

     

    (tbc)

     

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    1. 10 stars!!! This is awesome! It was well written, light-hearted…I was smiling the whole way through! And the emding…Nailbiting…I’m dying to know who’s on to Helena!!! It has to be someone new…so it’s not Bette or Alice…so it has to be either Shane, Dana, Dylan or Kit!!! I think it’s Shane though the way it’s said sounds like Kit! So I think it’s Kit then…Am I right, am I right, am I right, am I right? Tell me nowwwwwww……….I hate waiting…*pouts*…thanks!

    5. Oh no not again !!! Who is it this time? I guess Carmen who came home early ..vvitchy this is really good and you should post sooner babes. Keep up the good job thx

    6. Hey, I read the comments!! So give it all away if you’d like. ROFLOL “…It was drugged-up Alice after all- you couldn’t tell if she’d just exclaimed at having seen two Helena’s or if she’d just spotted an unusually nice butterfly on the wall!” LOL… Classic . Good flashback: I just watched the yoga scene again from ep 3.1, it was hilarious! I love the B&E banter…I don’t know maybe I just need to laugh. My guess…Shane?

    7. Thanks for posting again. This story is hilarious and original. Don’t reveal them to be twins just yet. Keep the suspense going. I think Shane has busted Helena this time and she can keep a secret

    8. Everyone keeps saying Shane, but I dont recall Shane leaving the house AFTER she entered it. Remember, Bette and Tinahave news they want to share, and since it hasnt been shared yet, it stands to reason that Shane is still in the house.

    10. awwwwww s***, the plot thickens…this story is so good…you write estelle and helena so well….i love this story…PLEASE post soon, don’t keep us hangin’, it just ain’t right (Big Smile). thanks for the post!

    11. lol…they just need to make an announcement because people are seeing them one by one…what was the announcement? Is this story gonna be a Bette & Helena…and a Tina & Estelle? Please post soon.

    14. I looove your cliffhangers, but I’d say it’s Shane. That person sounds too cool and absolutely not surprised to be anyone else imo. Anyway, Bette & Estelle interactions really just crack me up. Thi is so much fun. Plea

    18. Helena is as impatient as me, i’d walk into my own surprise party shouting surprise! lolcan’t wait to find out whose caught her this time post soon

    19. I read all the chapters and I can’t stop laughing, I like the way you’re writing this story!!! My guess is SHANE, I think she went outside to smoke and caught Helena…

    20. This is hilarious. Obviously, Helena lacks the skills to pull this off. Estelle on the other hand seems to be doing just fine. Cant wait to know who has busted Helena….AGAIN?!?

    23. Fantastic!! i love love love this! you write so damn well, really hilarious woman! couldn’t stop laughing all the way through! I need more please!!

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