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Double Vision 4
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As if on cue, Bette flashed a sickly sweet smile at Estelle. “Ready to go? I think it’s really nice of you to take Alice out, Helena. You two should do it more often”
Estelle narrowed her eyes at Bette and Helena. It was uncanny how they both seemed to be on the same plan without speaking a word to each other. She was not looking forward to fucking yoga- hell, she didn’t know the first thing about it! She cleared her throat and thought of a way to make Helena go instead. “Alright Alice. You go on out, I’ll just grab my bag and meet…”
“Isn’t that your bag?” Bette asked innocently, pointing to Helena’s bag sitting by Estelle’s feet.
Helena bit back a laugh. Bette was not letting Estelle get out of this! She smirked at Estelle from within the stall.
“Why, yes. That is…my… bag” replied a very much flustered Estelle. “But I do need a minute to relieve myself…”
“But didn’t you go once already?” Bette spoke up again, her innocent façade still in place. “Or is it another kind of ‘relieving’ you’re after?” She could hear faint rustles as Helena clutched her stomach trying hard not to laugh out loud.
Conniving arses, both of them! thought Estelle murderously. She grabbed the bag and muttered to Alice, brushing past her towards the door “C’mon Alice, let’s go now. Leave them to their juvenile g…”
“Them?” Alice asked quizzically. By her count, there was just one other person in the room- Bette.
Estelle froze, but was thankful to hear Bette’s timely-but-still-snide remark this time.
“Mixing up your pronouns again, Helena? Don’t mind her, Alice. You go on, have a good time” responded Bette, quickly shooing Alice and Estelle out the door.
Helena waited a few seconds before coming out of the stall. Suddenly left alone with the brunette of her dreams, Helena felt her vocabulary disappear. She managed to squeeze out a grateful smile. “That was close… thank you for helping us out”
Bette tilted her head and smiled at the suddenly shy woman in front of her “It was my pleasure” She added, a little wistfully “I can’t remember the last time I laughed so much”
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10 stars!!! This is awesome! It was well written, light-hearted…I was smiling the whole way through! And the emding…Nailbiting…I’m dying to know who’s on to Helena!!! It has to be someone new…so it’s not Bette or Alice…so it has to be either Shane, Dana, Dylan or Kit!!! I think it’s Shane though the way it’s said sounds like Kit! So I think it’s Kit then…Am I right, am I right, am I right, am I right? Tell me nowwwwwww……….I hate waiting…*pouts*…thanks!
dang busted again. This time i have NO clue of who it could be
yay!!! another update! i wonder who it is?!?! i hope u update again sooooon!!!!! =)
Cliffhangers! I think it’s…hmmm…was Jenny back at this point? Shoot–I suck at guessing! Please post soon!
Oh no not again !!! Who is it this time? I guess Carmen who came home early ..vvitchy this is really good and you should post sooner babes. Keep up the good job thx
Hey, I read the comments!! So give it all away if you’d like. ROFLOL “…It was drugged-up Alice after all- you couldn’t tell if she’d just exclaimed at having seen two Helena’s or if she’d just spotted an unusually nice butterfly on the wall!” LOL… Classic ïŠ. Good flashback: I just watched the yoga scene again from ep 3.1, it was hilarious! I love the B&E banter…I don’t know maybe I just need to laugh. My guess…Shane?
Thanks for posting again. This story is hilarious and original. Don’t reveal them to be twins just yet. Keep the suspense going. I think Shane has busted Helena this time and she can keep a secret
Everyone keeps saying Shane, but I dont recall Shane leaving the house AFTER she entered it. Remember, Bette and Tinahave news they want to share, and since it hasnt been shared yet, it stands to reason that Shane is still in the house.
This is so funny and this time who is bust Helena. Ok post soon please, thanks!
awwwwww s***, the plot thickens…this story is so good…you write estelle and helena so well….i love this story…PLEASE post soon, don’t keep us hangin’, it just ain’t right (Big Smile). thanks for the post!
lol…they just need to make an announcement because people are seeing them one by one…what was the announcement? Is this story gonna be a Bette & Helena…and a Tina & Estelle? Please post soon.
Great, hilarious and amusing….and again a cliffhanger, gosh who is it now, don’t have a clue.
Great chapter! I love the way this is going! I can’t wait for more! So Shane is the one right?
I looove your cliffhangers, but I’d say it’s Shane. That person sounds too cool and absolutely not surprised to be anyone else imo. Anyway, Bette & Estelle interactions really just crack me up. Thi is so much fun. Plea
Ok, what I meant to write before being interrupted was ” please keep posting…And the sooner, the better of course !”
Ha! Well done with the ending. Can’t wait to see who caught her this time! Great chapter.
oh…my….AGAIN….i think it won’t take over 1 week….everyone will know the truth…..hahahaha…………….
Helena is as impatient as me, i’d walk into my own surprise party shouting surprise! lolcan’t wait to find out whose caught her this time post soon
I read all the chapters and I can’t stop laughing, I like the way you’re writing this story!!! My guess is SHANE, I think she went outside to smoke and caught Helena…
This is hilarious. Obviously, Helena lacks the skills to pull this off. Estelle on the other hand seems to be doing just fine. Cant wait to know who has busted Helena….AGAIN?!?
Aaaargh, so much for suspense! can’t wait to know what’s coming next, your story is great! please post soon
Argggg…. so frustrating. Yeah, these twins need to get it out in the open. they can’t go on like this!
Fantastic!! i love love love this! you write so damn well, really hilarious woman! couldn’t stop laughing all the way through! I need more please!!