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Double Vision 4
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More like bloody miles away fumed Helena as she sat in her car. Her beloved sister had ‘insisted’ that she park her car farther from Bette’s place in case Alice noticed it. Helena had just seen Estelle and Alice drive past her towards the house, and now waited in parked car impatiently. Estelle had demanded that she be the first one to go in this time, after having had to endure an hour of the loathed yoga and a startlingly unpredictable Alice who’d burst into tears every five minutes. She made a fair case, and Helena had to give in. I better get my turn and soon!
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(Meanwhile, inside)
Estelle peered around the throng of chirpy kids, looking for Tina. She found her and Bette in the kitchen, both of them looking slightly frazzled. And tense? Wondered Estelle curiously as she walked up to them. “Hello”
Bette appeared to not hear her, but no matter, Tina responded “Hi Helena” Her eyes looking strained, Tina offered a smile. “Alice here too?”
Estelle nodded. “Actually…about that. Alice seems to think this was a birthday party for her”
“Shit!” Bette exclaimed, looking up. “I completely forgot!”
“Me too! I better go talk to her. She must be…” said Tina, walking towards the living room.
“But don’t say anything Tina” interrupted Estelle. “I have an idea” she nodded towards the cake Bette was lettering with icing.
Tina nodded and walked away, leaving Bette and Estelle in the kitchen.
Bette peered at Estelle questioningly, trying to judge which twin it was. It must be Helena; Estelle didn’t seem the type to help out anyone. Bette offered a slight smile.
“Don’t bother” scowled Estelle as she recalled how Bette had made her go to yoga.
Despite herself, Bette laughed, knowing instantly who it was. “Didn’t enjoy the yoga then?”
“Enjoyed it immensely, thank you very much” replied Estelle her voice dripping with sarcasm. She added thoughtfully “But I was glad I went, Alice seemed to be in a right state. She was so looking forward to this party too”
Bette cocked her head to the side “I didn’t realise vampires were the caring type”
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10 stars!!! This is awesome! It was well written, light-hearted…I was smiling the whole way through! And the emding…Nailbiting…I’m dying to know who’s on to Helena!!! It has to be someone new…so it’s not Bette or Alice…so it has to be either Shane, Dana, Dylan or Kit!!! I think it’s Shane though the way it’s said sounds like Kit! So I think it’s Kit then…Am I right, am I right, am I right, am I right? Tell me nowwwwwww……….I hate waiting…*pouts*…thanks!
dang busted again. This time i have NO clue of who it could be
yay!!! another update! i wonder who it is?!?! i hope u update again sooooon!!!!! =)
Cliffhangers! I think it’s…hmmm…was Jenny back at this point? Shoot–I suck at guessing! Please post soon!
Oh no not again !!! Who is it this time? I guess Carmen who came home early ..vvitchy this is really good and you should post sooner babes. Keep up the good job thx
Hey, I read the comments!! So give it all away if you’d like. ROFLOL “…It was drugged-up Alice after all- you couldn’t tell if she’d just exclaimed at having seen two Helena’s or if she’d just spotted an unusually nice butterfly on the wall!” LOL… Classic ïŠ. Good flashback: I just watched the yoga scene again from ep 3.1, it was hilarious! I love the B&E banter…I don’t know maybe I just need to laugh. My guess…Shane?
Thanks for posting again. This story is hilarious and original. Don’t reveal them to be twins just yet. Keep the suspense going. I think Shane has busted Helena this time and she can keep a secret
Everyone keeps saying Shane, but I dont recall Shane leaving the house AFTER she entered it. Remember, Bette and Tinahave news they want to share, and since it hasnt been shared yet, it stands to reason that Shane is still in the house.
This is so funny and this time who is bust Helena. Ok post soon please, thanks!
awwwwww s***, the plot thickens…this story is so good…you write estelle and helena so well….i love this story…PLEASE post soon, don’t keep us hangin’, it just ain’t right (Big Smile). thanks for the post!
lol…they just need to make an announcement because people are seeing them one by one…what was the announcement? Is this story gonna be a Bette & Helena…and a Tina & Estelle? Please post soon.
Great, hilarious and amusing….and again a cliffhanger, gosh who is it now, don’t have a clue.
Great chapter! I love the way this is going! I can’t wait for more! So Shane is the one right?
I looove your cliffhangers, but I’d say it’s Shane. That person sounds too cool and absolutely not surprised to be anyone else imo. Anyway, Bette & Estelle interactions really just crack me up. Thi is so much fun. Plea
Ok, what I meant to write before being interrupted was ” please keep posting…And the sooner, the better of course !”
Ha! Well done with the ending. Can’t wait to see who caught her this time! Great chapter.
oh…my….AGAIN….i think it won’t take over 1 week….everyone will know the truth…..hahahaha…………….
Helena is as impatient as me, i’d walk into my own surprise party shouting surprise! lolcan’t wait to find out whose caught her this time post soon
I read all the chapters and I can’t stop laughing, I like the way you’re writing this story!!! My guess is SHANE, I think she went outside to smoke and caught Helena…
This is hilarious. Obviously, Helena lacks the skills to pull this off. Estelle on the other hand seems to be doing just fine. Cant wait to know who has busted Helena….AGAIN?!?
Aaaargh, so much for suspense! can’t wait to know what’s coming next, your story is great! please post soon
Argggg…. so frustrating. Yeah, these twins need to get it out in the open. they can’t go on like this!
Fantastic!! i love love love this! you write so damn well, really hilarious woman! couldn’t stop laughing all the way through! I need more please!!