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Double Vision 5
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Helena smiled “Sarcasm is more Estelle’s forte”
“I see. Estelle…nice name” replied Jenny, now distracted by the ongoings inside Bette’s house “Bette and Tina look like they’re giving some sort of speech”
“Really?” Helena squinted before asking “Why aren’t you there?”
“Oh I didn’t know anything was going on. I just got in from out of town a few minutes ago. Obviously missed some excitement, seeing there’re two of you” Jenny nodded towards Helena.
“Actually…” Helena grinned mischievously “you’re right on time for the excitement. I could use your help”
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(Minutes later, Bette and Tina’s)
“Hi” Jenny said in her timid voice, walking in to the living room. She was met by a chorus of ‘hey’s, everyone sounding more than a little strained.
Shane came over and hugged her friend tightly “I’ve missed you, you crazy girl! Your timing is as weird as ever”
Jenny drew back and looked at her troubled friend “What’s going on?”
Shane spoke quietly “Bette and Tina are breaking up”
“Really?” It wasn’t that surprising actually. Jenny doubted either of them had been happy in a long while.
“Yeah”
“How’re they doing?” asked Jenny looking over at the others. Helena’s twin sat with Tina and Angelica, talking quietly. Bette was being comforted by Alice, though it seemed like it was the other way around.
Shane followed her gaze and sighed “Relieved, I think. That it’s done before it turned too ugly”
“Yeah I know” agreed Jenny softly, and added “I think I’ll go say hi”. She got up and walked to where Bette and Alice stood hugging. She laid a hand on Bette’s shoulder “Hey”
Bette broke her gaze on the pool and turned to Jenny, her eyes sad “Hey Jenny, good to see you”
Jenny smiled “Its good to be back” She didn’t want to ask Bette how she was. It would be meaningless- no one would be doing well after separating from an 8-year relationship. And Bette seemed to be finding some solace in gazing at the calm surface of the pool. It’s like she’s looking for something Jenny wondered. A few iotas to the side and Bette would be looking right at where Helena is hiding. Now that would bring new meaning to the phrase ‘finding each other’
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you cant stop there dude.now how long are you gonna hang us on tht cliff hangerwould you be a sweety and post soon coz this is a really intrestin story i usually dun do betty helena hookups but am kinduff likin this one lolwhat a smart banter
tattoo? mole? birthmark? come give!Pansy??? Pansy??? nope no more soup for you! and you purposely made it Jenny and not Shane…shame on you!!…p.s it’s after the tailgate party…I’m a bit tipsy!!!!
okay…so now i can safely guess Tina is next….right? and who is next to Tina…ummmm….my guess go to…..da da…..Shane….this’s really interesting….read ur story like play a puzzle game…..hahahha………
Cool! I think Shane would be next. Tina would be the last! :D Helena’s bare back?! Ho ho ho! Great work V!
*looking around suspiciously* secret message 1: The brown cow moos loudly after dusk. Please keep this one on the DL b’c if this leaks…someone will surely die…LOL. Jenny, very cool….I’m lovin’ it. Yeah, you provided me with the “laughs I need” (note: new code LIN), but I need them with more frequency so please post soon and post often…..Out.
Hey, this is one brilliant chapter! But then again, all your chapters are wonderful…your writing is definately fantastic…and another cliffhanger…grrr…make sure you post soon right…can’t wait to see what happens next!
So Tina knows that that is someome different. Jenny was so cool. how can you be so cool around someone you are breaking up with? Bette and Tina never crease to amaze me. thanks
Sad to see B&T split. Jenny is cool and funny and now Tina find something is wrong and let see whats next, thanks!
Watch out. Tina’s gonna find out. I hope Helena is quick on her feet with the missing body mark. I can feel the B&H love coming on. (Yes!!!!Pumping arm ala Tiger Woods)
Whaoooo ! Very nice chapter Vvith ! I just can’t believe I had not seen sooner that you had posted this chapter 10 days ago. Only today, when I saw that you had posted chapter 6 ( and got so excited ) have I realised I had missed chapter 5. Anyway, I loved it! The continual squabbling, bickering and teasing between Estelle and Bette just crack me up ! And that sentence : “Bette was being comforted by Alice, though it seemed like it was the other way around ” had me laughing my ass off, since I can totally picture that !! Now, I only hope Tina’s not gonna get too annoying once she realizes B & H are really getting along quite well… Thank you for this great chapter Vvitch . Ok, off to read your latest installment now…
oh oh there we go again what is it now huh? I guess Helena is usted for real now as Tina is the one who can now as she has seen her naked before LOL. Great job V, please go on
oh, I love this one sooo much :D I laugh out really loud every few lines I read :P Thanks so much for bringing us this and I really hope you’re getting into a Belena direction :D Keep it up and thanks again!
that was funny…jenny was so jenny- very funny. the entire bette, helena and estelle dynamic is written very well. please post soon!!
What happened…we were just about to find out what Tina saw and then the page ended…WTF. What’s the point in hiding anymore. For some reason Tina likes Estelle…and Bette and Helena are getting along swimmingly…time to unveil the surprise…sad to see B&T split. They seem to have the same taste in women. Please post soon
That was so funny you did a great job, especially with Jenny… I’m happy for Bette, now she is free to be with Helena! I can’t wait to the next chapter I’m really curious!!!
Yes yes i’m alive, and totally loving this fic!! she’s missing a tattoo isn’t she, yep that’s it, or maybe a scar, hmmm… well it’s something! Post soon please this is one of my absolute favourites!!
I missed this post, too! Not sure how that happened, but like clarice, I didn’t notice it until I started reading the newest one! Great, great, great! Now, off to the next post!