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Double Vision 5
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“Look Alice, Jenny’s here” said Bette peering into Alice who’d buried her head on her shoulder. Anyone else would’ve found it odd that she had to comfort Alice but Bette knew that it was because her best friend cared about her deeply. Of course, the pills weren’t helping but Bette didn’t mind. She could use a hug right now.
“Hey Al”
“Hi Jenny” sniffled Alice, looking up. She sniffed loudly “Sorry, I’m just a little emotional right now”
“Just a little?” smiled Estelle, walking up to them after Shane had gone over to talk to Tina. “Hello Jenny”
“Hello…Helena” replied Jenny, intentionally pausing before addressing Estelle by her twin’s name.
Sure enough, Alice picked up on it “Huh? You’ve been gone so long that you don’t know who she is?!”
“Oh I know who she is alright” smiled Jenny, her eyes glinting with mischief as both Bette and Estelle stared at her.
Estelle smiled weakly. Ohmigod! Does she know I’m not Helena?! Trying to recover quickly, she said the first thing that came to her mind. “Whatever do you mean Jenny?” Oh just great. Leave it open for her to elaborate, why don’t you Estelle? She tried to ignore Bette rolling her eyes.
Momentarily forgetting to cry, Alice agreed “Yeah, what’s that supposed to mean? Jeez Jenny, you’re weirder than ever!”
Jenny laughed good-naturedly at Alice’s comment. “Speaking of weird, the weirdest thing happened to me just a while ago. I thought I was seeing things!”
Bette stopped mid-eye-roll. She glanced at Estelle, who seemed to have stopped breathing.
“Well, it was more like I was seeing double” continued Jenny nonchalantly.
Now Estelle really did stop breathing. “Oh?” she managed to squeak.
“Well? What was it?” demanded Alice impatiently. Honestly, Jenny was all about theatrics.
“It was your car Helena” exclaimed Jenny “I was driving up and saw a car exactly like yours, parked a block away. Except it can’t be yours because your car is parked right here, isn’t it?”
“Yes” the relief was apparent in Estelle’s voice. She didn’t continue, hoping Jenny would drop it if she didn’t ask more.
Bette narrowed her eyes. Jenny was up to something
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you cant stop there dude.now how long are you gonna hang us on tht cliff hangerwould you be a sweety and post soon coz this is a really intrestin story i usually dun do betty helena hookups but am kinduff likin this one lolwhat a smart banter
tattoo? mole? birthmark? come give!Pansy??? Pansy??? nope no more soup for you! and you purposely made it Jenny and not Shane…shame on you!!…p.s it’s after the tailgate party…I’m a bit tipsy!!!!
okay…so now i can safely guess Tina is next….right? and who is next to Tina…ummmm….my guess go to…..da da…..Shane….this’s really interesting….read ur story like play a puzzle game…..hahahha………
Cool! I think Shane would be next. Tina would be the last! :D Helena’s bare back?! Ho ho ho! Great work V!
*looking around suspiciously* secret message 1: The brown cow moos loudly after dusk. Please keep this one on the DL b’c if this leaks…someone will surely die…LOL. Jenny, very cool….I’m lovin’ it. Yeah, you provided me with the “laughs I need” (note: new code LIN), but I need them with more frequency so please post soon and post often…..Out.
Hey, this is one brilliant chapter! But then again, all your chapters are wonderful…your writing is definately fantastic…and another cliffhanger…grrr…make sure you post soon right…can’t wait to see what happens next!
So Tina knows that that is someome different. Jenny was so cool. how can you be so cool around someone you are breaking up with? Bette and Tina never crease to amaze me. thanks
Sad to see B&T split. Jenny is cool and funny and now Tina find something is wrong and let see whats next, thanks!
Watch out. Tina’s gonna find out. I hope Helena is quick on her feet with the missing body mark. I can feel the B&H love coming on. (Yes!!!!Pumping arm ala Tiger Woods)
Whaoooo ! Very nice chapter Vvith ! I just can’t believe I had not seen sooner that you had posted this chapter 10 days ago. Only today, when I saw that you had posted chapter 6 ( and got so excited ) have I realised I had missed chapter 5. Anyway, I loved it! The continual squabbling, bickering and teasing between Estelle and Bette just crack me up ! And that sentence : “Bette was being comforted by Alice, though it seemed like it was the other way around ” had me laughing my ass off, since I can totally picture that !! Now, I only hope Tina’s not gonna get too annoying once she realizes B & H are really getting along quite well… Thank you for this great chapter Vvitch . Ok, off to read your latest installment now…
oh oh there we go again what is it now huh? I guess Helena is usted for real now as Tina is the one who can now as she has seen her naked before LOL. Great job V, please go on
oh, I love this one sooo much :D I laugh out really loud every few lines I read :P Thanks so much for bringing us this and I really hope you’re getting into a Belena direction :D Keep it up and thanks again!
that was funny…jenny was so jenny- very funny. the entire bette, helena and estelle dynamic is written very well. please post soon!!
What happened…we were just about to find out what Tina saw and then the page ended…WTF. What’s the point in hiding anymore. For some reason Tina likes Estelle…and Bette and Helena are getting along swimmingly…time to unveil the surprise…sad to see B&T split. They seem to have the same taste in women. Please post soon
That was so funny you did a great job, especially with Jenny… I’m happy for Bette, now she is free to be with Helena! I can’t wait to the next chapter I’m really curious!!!
Yes yes i’m alive, and totally loving this fic!! she’s missing a tattoo isn’t she, yep that’s it, or maybe a scar, hmmm… well it’s something! Post soon please this is one of my absolute favourites!!
I missed this post, too! Not sure how that happened, but like clarice, I didn’t notice it until I started reading the newest one! Great, great, great! Now, off to the next post!