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Double Vision 5
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“Yes, really! Looked exactly the same. Identical, you could say”
Shite. Estelle’s mouth went dry “…are you sure?”
“Mm hmm. I’m pretty sure I saw one exactly like you…uhmm, it” Jenny corrected herself smilingly.
Estelle’s thoughts made a sharp right from Anxious Road to Glare Lane. Oh I see! I bet my dear sister put you up to this! thought Estelle as she scowled at Jenny for putting her on the spot. She could see from the corner of her eye that Bette was enjoying this immensely now.
Continuing to look innocently sweet, Jenny suddenly cocked her head “Is that your phone ringing Helena?”
Bette struggled not to laugh aloud. Only Jenny could pull this off! “I think it is!”
“No it isn’t” replied Estelle mutinously
“I can’t hear anything either” echoed Alice wearily. She’d given up trying to make sense of this conversation.
“It can’t hurt to check” spoke up Bette, looking at Estelle helpfully.
Muttering curses under her breath Estelle retrieved her phone and pretended to look at it “See? Not ringing”
Jenny peered over her shoulder “you seem to have a few missed calls though” Helena had wanted to make Estelle return her calls. “Do you want to call them back?” she asked primly, daring Estelle to make her push it even more.
“Why y…” Sputtered Estelle.
“Tell you what” broke in Bette smoothly. “I think a dip in the pool would do us all good right now. Jenny, why don’t you go with her while she returns those calls and make sure Helena comes back?”
“Great idea Bette” Jenny was impressed with the way Bette had exchanged the words ‘Helena’ and ‘her’ to mean exactly what she wanted to say. She wondered if Alice had picked up on it.
Estelle certainly had. With one last scathing look at Bette, Estelle grumbled an excuse and walked away, followed closely by Jenny.
~~~
(Later, by the pool)
From her vantage point in the pool, Shane trained her eyes keenly on two brunettes. The same two brunettes who’d been doing the discreet version of I’m-the-Alpha-here-so-step-off-bitch mere hours ago were now unusually chatty. Bette had done no more than two laps before taking an extra long breather and now lounged by the shallow end talking to Helena. Helena herself was bikini-clad and sat on the edge of the pool with her legs dangling in the water. Shane saw that Helena burst out laughing every so often at something Bette said before clapping her hand on her mouth and looking around guiltily to see if anyone else noticed
“If you keep doing that, people are going to notice, you know. You stopping the laughter so abruptly is more noticeable!” Bette grinned up at Helena.
Helena cringed “I know! I keep forgetting. God, I’m so bad at this!”
“Yes you are”
“Why, thank you Bette, your faith in me is astonishing” retorted Helena dryly.
“Ah! That’s more like Estelle” nodded Bette approvingly
Helena smiled before adding hesitantly “I hope she didn’t say anything to upset you…earlier”
“Not more than usual” joked Bette. Seeing Helena’s worried expression she hastily added “No no, it was fine. She behaved”
“Good” replied Helena with relief but continued in her hesitant tone “She told me about your news…about you and Tina. How are you doing?”
“I’m ok” replied Bette simply. Not wanting Helena to misunderstand, she continued “It’s not that I don’t want to talk. I just don’t want to analyse and recap every little thing, you know? I think if we do that too much, we forget the magic and the love that was there before. And I’d like to keep good memories as they are”
“I know what you mean” Helena nodded, understanding “We’ll not talk of it then. But you’ll tell me if you do need to, right?”
“Need to what?” interrupted Tina walking up to them. She smiled and crouched down by the poolside “you two seem to be getting along”
“We do, don’t we?” laughed Bette. Helena remained silent but smiled- she didn’t want to say anything in case she said something un-Estelle-like to Tina.
“You sure do” nodded Tina as she glanced at Helena. “Listen Bette, I was wondering if you could take Angelica to get her sh…” Tina was distracted by something on Helena’s almost bare back “…to uhmm…get her shots tomorr…” or rather, the lack of something there. Tina stopped as she stared at Helena’s back.
“What? What is it?” asked Bette. She looked back and forth between Tina and Helena.
Helena’s eyes widened as she realised what Tina had noticed. Uh-oh…
(tbc)
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you cant stop there dude.now how long are you gonna hang us on tht cliff hangerwould you be a sweety and post soon coz this is a really intrestin story i usually dun do betty helena hookups but am kinduff likin this one lolwhat a smart banter
tattoo? mole? birthmark? come give!Pansy??? Pansy??? nope no more soup for you! and you purposely made it Jenny and not Shane…shame on you!!…p.s it’s after the tailgate party…I’m a bit tipsy!!!!
okay…so now i can safely guess Tina is next….right? and who is next to Tina…ummmm….my guess go to…..da da…..Shane….this’s really interesting….read ur story like play a puzzle game…..hahahha………
Cool! I think Shane would be next. Tina would be the last! :D Helena’s bare back?! Ho ho ho! Great work V!
*looking around suspiciously* secret message 1: The brown cow moos loudly after dusk. Please keep this one on the DL b’c if this leaks…someone will surely die…LOL. Jenny, very cool….I’m lovin’ it. Yeah, you provided me with the “laughs I need” (note: new code LIN), but I need them with more frequency so please post soon and post often…..Out.
Hey, this is one brilliant chapter! But then again, all your chapters are wonderful…your writing is definately fantastic…and another cliffhanger…grrr…make sure you post soon right…can’t wait to see what happens next!
So Tina knows that that is someome different. Jenny was so cool. how can you be so cool around someone you are breaking up with? Bette and Tina never crease to amaze me. thanks
Sad to see B&T split. Jenny is cool and funny and now Tina find something is wrong and let see whats next, thanks!
Watch out. Tina’s gonna find out. I hope Helena is quick on her feet with the missing body mark. I can feel the B&H love coming on. (Yes!!!!Pumping arm ala Tiger Woods)
Whaoooo ! Very nice chapter Vvith ! I just can’t believe I had not seen sooner that you had posted this chapter 10 days ago. Only today, when I saw that you had posted chapter 6 ( and got so excited ) have I realised I had missed chapter 5. Anyway, I loved it! The continual squabbling, bickering and teasing between Estelle and Bette just crack me up ! And that sentence : “Bette was being comforted by Alice, though it seemed like it was the other way around ” had me laughing my ass off, since I can totally picture that !! Now, I only hope Tina’s not gonna get too annoying once she realizes B & H are really getting along quite well… Thank you for this great chapter Vvitch . Ok, off to read your latest installment now…
oh oh there we go again what is it now huh? I guess Helena is usted for real now as Tina is the one who can now as she has seen her naked before LOL. Great job V, please go on
oh, I love this one sooo much :D I laugh out really loud every few lines I read :P Thanks so much for bringing us this and I really hope you’re getting into a Belena direction :D Keep it up and thanks again!
that was funny…jenny was so jenny- very funny. the entire bette, helena and estelle dynamic is written very well. please post soon!!
What happened…we were just about to find out what Tina saw and then the page ended…WTF. What’s the point in hiding anymore. For some reason Tina likes Estelle…and Bette and Helena are getting along swimmingly…time to unveil the surprise…sad to see B&T split. They seem to have the same taste in women. Please post soon
That was so funny you did a great job, especially with Jenny… I’m happy for Bette, now she is free to be with Helena! I can’t wait to the next chapter I’m really curious!!!
Yes yes i’m alive, and totally loving this fic!! she’s missing a tattoo isn’t she, yep that’s it, or maybe a scar, hmmm… well it’s something! Post soon please this is one of my absolute favourites!!
I missed this post, too! Not sure how that happened, but like clarice, I didn’t notice it until I started reading the newest one! Great, great, great! Now, off to the next post!