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    Drowning 18

    Story written on June 29, 2005 by lucia.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55111
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    The night isn’t over yet…just read!

     

    No, you dont understand. I need my best friend back, not my girlfriend. My best friend will understand. My girlfriend wont. Shell run from me. Shell blame me. I just need my friend.

     

    Baby, Im the same person. Ill understand. You just need to talk to me.

     

    No you wont. Youre already leaving. Youre leaving, Al. I did this so you wouldnt. I dont know how to fix this. Her crying started again, her shoulders softly rising and falling with each new tear.

     

    Dana, Im not leaving for good. Ill be back. I promise.

     

    Tina promised too, Al.

     

    Alice looked down at Dana, and forcing Dana to meet her gaze, Im coming home. I have to do this for work, Dane, but I will call you and you can call me. Im coming home. I wouldnt leave you like that.

     

    Can you be my friend, Al? I really need her. Please.

     

    Ive always been your friend. I dont know how to make myself two people. Being your girlfriend never took away from that, it made it stronger, hon. She looked down at Dana who wasnt buying it. For now she would give in, We already technically split up, so I guess thats what I am right? Alice bent her head to kiss Danas cheek. Just Dane? Dana looked up at her in response, Dont take too long. I cant wait forever.

     

    They laid in silence holding each other. Alice?

     

    Alice had been falling asleep, mmmyeah, hon?

     

    Um, can I sleep here tonight? I mean, if youd be more comfortable

     

    Of course you can, this is still your house and you bed. Alice leaned in and kissed the top of Danas head before adding, Just move over, youre hogging the pillows!!!

     

    Alice adjusted herself in bed, making herself comfortable. Dana did the same and hesitantly turned her body into Alices to hold her. As they fell asleep Dana whispered, Thank you, Al. I love you.

     

    The next morning, Tina was chasing Cara, trying to get to her before she woke Alice up, it was only 6:30 and that couldnt be a good thing. Cara ran through the hallway leading to Alices bedroom. Tina caught up to Cara, but too late to save Alice. Cara ran into Alice room and jumped on the bed. Aunt Awice, its time for pancakes. You said I could wake you. Aunt Awice?

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    1. I’m first! *Dances around* Can I just say how much I love that little girl? She’s so adorable, “Aunt Awice” so cute! Cant wait to see how she reacts to meeting Bette.

    4. This has got to be my fsv. fanfic ever! It’s awesome and it kinda incorperates all the best couples (danish, sharmen and bettina). Cara is a doll, can’t wait for bette to meet her! I hope you fix up all these broken realitionships soon, I don’t know if I can handle weeping like a baby again!

    5. OMG – I was crying for like three pages! Hats off to you, luce! I love how involved the gang is in your story. And your original characters are so believable. You’re killing us AND Alice here –come on, what the flip has got Dana so freaked?! Post soon, i’m loving it.

    7. Applause!! I think I have page two inscribed into my memory for all time now. Evil lucia keeping Alice on the edge of her seat with Dana’s big secret. ;-)

    9. The Alice and Dana was so touching…what’s up with Dana? Inquiring readers want to know.
      Bette and Cara will be interesting. Julia and Chris…what’s the story there? I have a feeling that there is one.
      Now I want pancakes.

    12. I love it and I hope that dana speaks to alice soon and I also hope that they can sort though this as they are so good together please post soon

    13. I like the way you have the rest of the group involved in the Danish story. I’m wondering what’s going to happen with all of them, but mostly wondering what’s going on with Dana. Loved the first scene, poor Alice. Please update soon (and your other fic).

    15. lucia- i am completely absorbed in this. that opening scene is just knee knockin, slack jaw good. what is going on with Dana?! really? what?? i too love how this tale is about the whole gang. the tina/bette/cara/robin/julia/CHRIS thing is juicy and fun.post soon. thanks!

    17. Great as always :) I’m afraid that Dana’s secret is something HUGE.. and Alice will freak out and.. but in the end I know (or hope, more likely) that there will be a happy DANISH ending :D

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