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Drowning 18
I do not. Dana said with mock insult.
You do too! Every time!
So you took advantage of me when I was sleeping.
You were the one half dressed asleep in the bed. Alice said with a smile, slowly moving her hand to grab the pillow and hit Dana with it.
Hey, no fair! Dana squealed fighting back with another pillow. Both had relaxed in each others company. Trying to replace the awkward moments with laughter, then comfortable silence. They laid together in bed, Alice still resting on top of Dana.
Dane, can I ask you a question? Alice said, looking down pensively at Dana.
Sure.
Why are you wearing my dirty sleep shirt? I mean you know where I keep the clean ones. You even got one for Shane.
I didnt mean to fall asleep in it. I just, Dana looked away from Alice, slightly embarrassed, I just wanted to smell you. Ive missed you and falling asleep next to you. Shanes pillows dont smell like you. I guess I just wanted you near me for a little bit, but I fell asleep.
Oh. Was all Alice managed to get out. That wasnt the answer she was expecting. She wasnt sure what she was expecting, just not that. If she missed her so much, then why do this? None of it was making sense.
Before she got her filter fully working, she blurted out, Then why did you leave? Why dont you love me anymore?
Dana put her hand up to Alice face and forced Alice to look at her, Dont ever think that. Never. Alice I told you, I love you. I will always love you. I am just so scared you wont understand and youll leave.
What wont I understand? If you love me so much and want me to stay, explain why you left. You do get that that makes no sense, right?
What do you mean what? We spoke about this, Al. You said you understood. Dana said, searching Alices eyes for some acknowledgment.
Alice put her arm under self to raise herself off of Dana, When did I say I understand? I dont understand. Dana, this makes no sense to me. Im just trying to figure out how to do the right thing by you and not lose you. What are you talking about?
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(54 votes, average: 4.46 out of 5)
I’m first! *Dances around* Can I just say how much I love that little girl? She’s so adorable, “Aunt Awice” so cute! Cant wait to see how she reacts to meeting Bette.
Between Cara meeting Bette and Tina being ‘Chris’, I can’t wait for the next chapter.
ALice and Dana in the begining just killed me! Sooo good!
This has got to be my fsv. fanfic ever! It’s awesome and it kinda incorperates all the best couples (danish, sharmen and bettina). Cara is a doll, can’t wait for bette to meet her! I hope you fix up all these broken realitionships soon, I don’t know if I can handle weeping like a baby again!
OMG – I was crying for like three pages! Hats off to you, luce! I love how involved the gang is in your story. And your original characters are so believable. You’re killing us AND Alice here –come on, what the flip has got Dana so freaked?! Post soon, i’m loving it.
“hot, hot, hot” to quote a one miss Leisha Hailey
Applause!! I think I have page two inscribed into my memory for all time now. Evil lucia keeping Alice on the edge of her seat with Dana’s big secret. ;-)
Superb!!!
Thank you.
The Alice and Dana was so touching…what’s up with Dana? Inquiring readers want to know.
Bette and Cara will be interesting. Julia and Chris…what’s the story there? I have a feeling that there is one.
Now I want pancakes.
Awww….so sweet and I *nearly* cried…numerous times…must be my stubborn qualities keeping it in…Love it!!!
I am just dying to find out what is going on in little Dana’s mind and heart.
I love it and I hope that dana speaks to alice soon and I also hope that they can sort though this as they are so good together please post soon
I like the way you have the rest of the group involved in the Danish story. I’m wondering what’s going to happen with all of them, but mostly wondering what’s going on with Dana. Loved the first scene, poor Alice. Please update soon (and your other fic).
K
great chapter. Can’t wait for lunch.
lucia- i am completely absorbed in this. that opening scene is just knee knockin, slack jaw good. what is going on with Dana?! really? what?? i too love how this tale is about the whole gang. the tina/bette/cara/robin/julia/CHRIS thing is juicy and fun.post soon. thanks!
That was great!! Cant wait to see whats next. Please please please post soon!
Great as always :) I’m afraid that Dana’s secret is something HUGE.. and Alice will freak out and.. but in the end I know (or hope, more likely) that there will be a happy DANISH ending :D
Awesome story! More please!!! Can’t wait!