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Drowning 18
You really dont remember? I knew it was too easy. You even said no problem. You said you were ok with it. Outside Milk, the other night. You dont remember? Dana said depressively. She really thought that Alice understood and they would figure out how to do this. She put her hands on Alices side as she squirmed out from under Alice. She turned on her side facing the window.
Alice just lay there, dumbfounded. She had no recollection of this. Why would she ever say she was ok with this and there was no problem. She was most certainly not ok with this. She couldnt imagine what would ever change to make her think it would be ok. No more shots for her.
Dane. She said, reaching out to stroke Danas back. Dana flinched at Alices touch and started to cry into her pillow. Alice reached wrap her arms around Dana. Though she was still confused about what was going on, she couldnt see Dana in such pain. Baby. Talk to me. I dont understand. Please explain this to me. Please.
Dana just kept crying, her cries turning into sobs. She turned in Alices arms and buried her head in Alices chest, clutching on to her.
Shhh. Its going to be ok, Baby. Whatever it is, well work it out. Shhh. Alice tried to comfort Dana. As much as she wanted to press for answers, she knew this wasnt the time. Making sure Dana was ok was all she mattered to her right now. She didnt know what was going on with her girlfriend, but she knew whatever it was eating Dana up inside. Whatever pain this situation was causing Alice was secondary to making sure that Dana was ok. Alice had only seen Dana cry like that twice. And it always ripped her own heart out to see Dana in such pain. Alice felt Danas body shake with each tear.
After lying like that for quite some time, neither one speaking, Dana finally spoke in muffled tones, AlIm so sorry. I dont know what to do. I didnt want to lose you. I just needed my best friend.
Im right here baby. I didnt go anywhere. Ill always be right here.
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(54 votes, average: 4.46 out of 5)
I’m first! *Dances around* Can I just say how much I love that little girl? She’s so adorable, “Aunt Awice” so cute! Cant wait to see how she reacts to meeting Bette.
Between Cara meeting Bette and Tina being ‘Chris’, I can’t wait for the next chapter.
ALice and Dana in the begining just killed me! Sooo good!
This has got to be my fsv. fanfic ever! It’s awesome and it kinda incorperates all the best couples (danish, sharmen and bettina). Cara is a doll, can’t wait for bette to meet her! I hope you fix up all these broken realitionships soon, I don’t know if I can handle weeping like a baby again!
OMG – I was crying for like three pages! Hats off to you, luce! I love how involved the gang is in your story. And your original characters are so believable. You’re killing us AND Alice here –come on, what the flip has got Dana so freaked?! Post soon, i’m loving it.
“hot, hot, hot” to quote a one miss Leisha Hailey
Applause!! I think I have page two inscribed into my memory for all time now. Evil lucia keeping Alice on the edge of her seat with Dana’s big secret. ;-)
Superb!!!
Thank you.
The Alice and Dana was so touching…what’s up with Dana? Inquiring readers want to know.
Bette and Cara will be interesting. Julia and Chris…what’s the story there? I have a feeling that there is one.
Now I want pancakes.
Awww….so sweet and I *nearly* cried…numerous times…must be my stubborn qualities keeping it in…Love it!!!
I am just dying to find out what is going on in little Dana’s mind and heart.
I love it and I hope that dana speaks to alice soon and I also hope that they can sort though this as they are so good together please post soon
I like the way you have the rest of the group involved in the Danish story. I’m wondering what’s going to happen with all of them, but mostly wondering what’s going on with Dana. Loved the first scene, poor Alice. Please update soon (and your other fic).
K
great chapter. Can’t wait for lunch.
lucia- i am completely absorbed in this. that opening scene is just knee knockin, slack jaw good. what is going on with Dana?! really? what?? i too love how this tale is about the whole gang. the tina/bette/cara/robin/julia/CHRIS thing is juicy and fun.post soon. thanks!
That was great!! Cant wait to see whats next. Please please please post soon!
Great as always :) I’m afraid that Dana’s secret is something HUGE.. and Alice will freak out and.. but in the end I know (or hope, more likely) that there will be a happy DANISH ending :D
Awesome story! More please!!! Can’t wait!