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Drowning – 23
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“Hasn’t she said enough yet?” Bette mumbled.
“Hey Porter, don’t start with me, you said you wanted to hear what I had to say. So don’t go getting all upset with me for actually saying what you both have been thinking and haven’t had the chutzpah to say.” Alice reached down to the table and drinking down the last of her drink.
“I didn’t ask to hear your opinion.” Bette said, “But you’re right, let’s just drop it for now. So what did happen since lunch to put you in such a good mood?”
“Dana happened, that’s what happened. I just don’t know what the ***** I’m supposed to do. I can’t take this push-pull thing she is doing. One moment she’s the Dana I’ve always known and the next she is some cold, distant stranger that looks a heck of a lot like this woman I happen to love.” Alice felt her eyes beginning to fill. What better defense for sadness then more alcohol, she thought as she called for the waiter to bring her another drink.
“Are you sure you want another one?” Bette asked.
“Yes mom. I’m already screwed for driving home and need to grab a cab, so why not enjoy it. Any issues with that?”
Both Robin and Bette shook their heads, “No, Al. We just care, that’s all.” Robin said. “So, I take it she is now in push mode of the push-pull thing?”
“Score one for Robin!” Alice exclaimed.
“What did she do?”
“She rang the doorbell at the house.”
Robin looked at Alice, “Are you telling me that you are this upset and drunk because she rang a doorbell?”
“Honestly Robin, how lame do you think I am?” Alice asked. “No. It’s not the action of ringing the doorbell that got me upset. It was the meaning behind it. That in her head, it’s not her house anymore and she can’t just walk in, like she’s really not coming home.”
“Did you say anything to her about it?” Bette asked.
“Yeah, she said she was trying to be respectful of me. That she wasn’t sure if I would want her to just walk in.”
“Maybe that’s really all there is, Al.” Bette said. “Dana isn’t the presumptuous type. I can easily see her feeling awkward walking into the house without knowing what you thought about it. I mean she is the one who left, it is actually the right thing to do.”
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I have finally caught up with your story, i’ve been reading for weeks., and what a chapter i eventually get to comment on. I am nearly speechless. WOW, WOW, WOW! <-I said nearly.
That was really really excellent – you know I love this story but that was definitely your best chapter. I particularly enjoyed the interaction with Alice and Bette/Robin. So like a drunk Alice would be!!!!!! Really looking forward to the next chapter – what is in the letter???………oh yeah and the sex scene was kinda hawt!!!
wow. that was great. i actually got a bit teary-eyed. i love danish and thank you for dana finally showing alice the letter. can’t wait for the next update. great job!
Noooooooooooooooooo what a way to leave it,grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr, i hate cliffhangers, dont leave us hanging for too long, this chapter was wonderful, i hope Alice stays and does’nt go to W.D.C. You have got my head spinning..lol.
Thank you.
oi,dont leave us hanging here!!!! What an amazing chapter…wow
God you are good at dragging this out, and yet its always enough to pull us in for more. Of course, i cant wait for the next chapter so get a move on it. :) *****
lol “you work for IC”, O_o really? haha ok better post soon, I only forgive you ’cause the sex scene and all the argument was great!
Oooh… what’s in the letter? What’s in it that causes so much drama? Where’s the next chapter?
CCCCCUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMM OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNN! update soon i’m sooooooooooo p’od that we didn’t get to see it yet! Ah! But that was fuckin’ awesome chapter! Update as soooon as you possibly can, Love it as always!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, You’re going to make us wait a week aren’t you. You can’t do this to me. I’m running out of food, my friends think I’ve left the country. All I can do is wait and check my computer. LOL Looking forward to your next chapter.
You just wouldn’t tell, I’m on the verge of pulling my hair out lol. That was wonderful, the sex was hot and emotional at the same time. Please, please update soon before I really go crazy.
betru2u checking in. OMG this chapter was incredible. I think you managed to trigger every single emotion I have. Yet, you still had to keep us waiting just a little longer for the big secret to be revealed LOL! Admit it, you work for IC. ;) I’ll be waiting patiently for the next round. Btw, the sex was hot!
CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP!
That’s all I was thinking when I read how you ended this. Luce, you’re driving me crazy here! I hope you’re happy that I was crying for most of this one too – even during the HOT sex scene! I complain, but you know I love the tease. (hey, my “skip-a-chapter” plan worked!)
Ok, I have spent the majority of the day and night reading all of the chapters to this story. This is an outstanding story! I love it, love it, love it! Your writing ability to tell a story is fantastic. You are awesome at describing scenes, you use direct quotes perfectly and grammatical it’s wonderful. Keep up the unbelievable great work! I cannot wait to read the next chapter and the next and the next, etc… I love it!
Finally something happened! I hate (and LOVE) your cliffhangers :D Danish can solve the stalker problem together! Hopefully you are not going to make us too long *fingers crossed*. *5*
Loved the pace of this chapter. And the cliffhanger is so perfect that this time I don’t mind it all, provided you post again soon, that is!
just found your fic here and good job! just when i thought i could know the real reason, u left it there…please update ASAP.. :)
Were are you. I’m a little worried haven’t seen anything from you anywhere, here or the media boards. I hope your OK. I know you’re from the US I just hope not the Gulf coast.